Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ vựng liên quan và câu có cấu trúc đúng để thể hiện khả năng ngôn ngữ của bạn.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember important dates and numbers, which helps me in my daily life.

제안: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy trình bày cảm xúc và giải pháp một cách cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

예시: Yes, I once forgot my wallet at a hotel, which made me feel very upset. Since then, I have been trying to improve my memory by making lists and setting reminders.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lộn xộn và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, đồng thời giải thích cụ thể những gì bạn cần nhớ trong cuộc sống hàng ngày.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my study schedule because it helps me manage my time and improve my skills and weaknesses.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích phương pháp bạn sử dụng để ghi nhớ, và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I usually play memory games or use apps that help me practice memorising, which improves my ability to remember important information.

× Sure, I'm really good at memorizing thing.

✓ Sure, I'm really good at memorizing things.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items or concepts that can be memorized, not just one.

× I can have a good memorial for death and umm and the number even I kind of I can remember about first people and try to restrict a pupil.

✓ I can have a good memory for dates and numbers; I can also remember people's names and try to focus as a student.

The word 'memorial' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'memory' to refer to the ability to remember. Also, the sentence structure and word choice were unclear and needed correction for clarity and proper adjective use.

× I feel a good mirror is very.

✓ I feel having a good memory is very important.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Mirror' is incorrect; it should be 'memory'. The sentence needs a verb and object to be complete and meaningful.

× Just I've forgotten my wallet in the hotel.

✓ I just forgot my wallet in the hotel.

The present perfect tense 'I've forgotten' is less appropriate here; simple past 'forgot' fits better because the action happened at a specific time in the past.

× I feel very regressed with my actions at last time, so I think I need to improve my memory to solving the problem either effective way.

✓ I felt very regretful about my actions last time, so I think I need to improve my memory to solve problems more effectively.

'Regressed' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'regretful'. 'At last time' should be 'last time'. 'To solving' should be 'to solve'. 'Either effective way' should be 'more effectively' to correctly modify the verb.

× I think I need to remember the the area of studies in this plan because I have studying plan is a essential plan that I need to that I have to use every day because I'll start because I'll abilities and my weakness, so I need to improve it every day.

✓ I think I need to remember the areas of study in this plan because my study plan is an essential plan that I have to use every day to improve my abilities and weaknesses, so I need to work on it every day.

Double 'the' is incorrect. 'Area of studies' should be 'areas of study'. 'A essential' should be 'an essential' because 'essential' starts with a vowel sound. The sentence structure is confusing and needed rephrasing for clarity.

× I think I need to play a game like play games that are practicing A memorize like a publisher and.

✓ I think I need to play games that practice memorization, like puzzles and others.

The phrase 'practicing A memorize like a publisher' is incorrect and unclear. 'Practice memorization' is the correct phrase. 'Publisher' is likely a misheard or misused word; 'puzzles' fits better in context.

× In a squid to improve my memory really.

✓ In order to really improve my memory.

'In a squid' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in order to'. The sentence fragment needs to be completed or connected properly.