Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“a fish has a three seconds brand”应为“a fish has a three-second memory”。建议你使用更准确的表达，并且避免重复和冗长。

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget new words shortly after learning them, just like the saying that a goldfish has a three-second memory.

제안: 回答时应更直接，避免重复表达“everyone must have forgotten something”。此外，句子结构需要更清晰，时态要一致。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot the deadline for an assignment and had to rush to submit it on time.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“was scared on busy”应为“was so busy”，以及“forgot to having”应为“forgot to have”。建议简洁表达并使用连词使句子更流畅。

예시: I need to remember to eat regularly because I often get so busy that I forget to have lunch. To avoid this, I usually set reminders on my phone.

제안: 句子结构不完整且重复，如“on my on my cell phones”，建议使用更准确的表达并注意语法。

예시: To remember important things, I usually write them down on paper or in my phone so that I can be reminded to deal with them.

× I'm just like a fish has a three seconds brand

✓ I'm just like a fish that has a three-second brain

这里的fish是单数，应该用单数形式的动词has，同时brand应为brain，且three seconds作为复合形容词修饰brain时，seconds应为单数second。

× when I learn the world before and after few seconds I totally forget it

✓ when I learn the word, before and after a few seconds, I totally forget it

这里的preposition使用不当，应该在few seconds前加冠词a，且world应为word。

× once I forget my schedule on an assignment

✓ once I forgot my schedule on an assignment

这里描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式forgot。

× I was rushing on to submit my assignment

✓ I was rushing to submit my assignment

rush后面直接接to do结构，不需要介词on。

× sometimes I was scared on busy and I always forgot to having my lunch

✓ sometimes I was so busy and I always forgot to have my lunch

这里was scared用错，应该是was so busy；forgot后面接动词不定式to have，而不是to having。

× I usually to set a reminders on my cell phone to umm reminds me that uh

✓ I usually set reminders on my cell phone to remind me that

usually后不接to，reminders是复数，reminds应为remind。

× I will usually write it down on paper on my on my cell phones and to keep reminds me that I have to deal with it or like remember those kind of things

✓ I will usually write it down on paper or on my cell phone to keep reminding me that I have to deal with it or remember those kinds of things

重复使用on my，cell phones应为cell phone，to keep后应接动名词reminding，those kind应为those kinds。