Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。特に「it is important to writing paper」や「I am writing paper is very, very skills」の部分は意味が不明瞭です。より自然な英語表現を使い、簡潔に答えることを心がけましょう。

예시: Yes, I am good at memorizing things because it helps me in my studies and daily life. For example, I can remember important dates and facts easily.

제안: 文法ミスと不明瞭な表現が目立ちます。「dinner promise」よりも「dinner appointment」や「dinner plans」が自然です。また、内容を明確に伝えるために、具体的な詳細を加えましょう。

예시: Yes, I once forgot a dinner appointment with my girlfriend because I was very busy that day. It made me realize the importance of keeping track of my schedule.

제안: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。「I need a calendar to remember many important things」など、シンプルで正確な表現を使いましょう。具体的な例も明確に述べると良いです。

예시: I need a calendar to remember many important things. For example, I write down who I will meet, where, and at what time.

제안: 繰り返しや文法の誤りがあり、流暢さに欠けます。「I write down my schedule on my phone because I always have it with me」など、簡潔で自然な表現を心がけましょう。

예시: I remember important things by writing my schedule on my phone because I always have it with me. This helps me stay organized and not forget anything important.

× Umm, it is important to writing paper.

✓ Umm, it is important to write papers.

The phrase 'important to writing' is incorrect because after 'important to', the base form of the verb (infinitive) should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'paper' should be plural if referring to papers in general.

× So I am writing paper is very, very skills.

✓ So, writing papers requires a lot of skill.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. The corrected sentence uses proper sentence structure and conveys the intended meaning clearly.

× I have a dinner promise to a with my girlfriend, but I forgotten important points.

✓ I had a dinner promise with my girlfriend, but I forgot important points.

The sentence mixes present perfect and past tense incorrectly. 'Have a dinner promise' should be past tense 'had', and 'forgotten' (past participle) should be 'forgot' (simple past) to match the past event.

× I have a dinner promise to a with my girlfriend

✓ I have a dinner promise with my girlfriend

The preposition 'to a' is incorrect here. The correct preposition to indicate an appointment or promise with someone is 'with'.

× I need calendar each Remember Me many important things.

✓ I need a calendar to remember many important things.

The original sentence misuses 'each Remember Me' and lacks an article before 'calendar'. The corrected sentence uses 'a calendar' and proper infinitive form 'to remember'.

× For example I write calendar down to for who, where time it is.

✓ For example, I write down on the calendar who, where, and what time it is.

The prepositions and word order are incorrect. 'Write down on the calendar' is correct, and the list of details should be connected properly.

× I remember important things to write down schedule in my telephone because my I have my telephone for all the time.

✓ I remember important things by writing down my schedule on my phone because I have my phone with me all the time.

The sentence has pronoun confusion and awkward phrasing. 'My telephone' is better as 'my phone', and the sentence is restructured for clarity.

× This helps me my telephone helps me stay organized and not forget anything important.

✓ This helps me stay organized and not forget anything important.

The original sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence is concise and grammatically correct.