Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Are you good at memorising things?
수험생
I'll say that I have a good memory for things that interest me. Uh, sometimes I struggle to recall certain names or dates related to people unless I write them down. And to have with this I usually make list or note everything on my phone which it makes it easier to remember important information.
시험관
Have you ever forgotten something important?
수험생
Yes, I have forgotten important things quite often. For example, when I go shopping, I sometimes forget to bike necessary groceries like milk and bread, because I don't write them down or make a list on my phone. As a result, I have to return to the store later. We can be quite inconvenient.
시험관
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
수험생
On a daily basis I need to remember a lot of things like homework tasks or personal events. I try not to forget some important days like birthdays or anniversaries, and I usually use reminders on my phone and write them down in a planner.
시험관
How do you remember important things?
수험생
I usually jot down important things in my phone or in the notebook. Sometimes I set reminder to make sure I don't forget to forget to make sure I don't forget anything. These methods have made to stay organized and I need more time effectively.
평가
총점
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
점수: 75.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm như "make list" nên là "make a list" và câu cuối hơi lủng củng. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và câu trả lời không nên quá dài.
예시: I have a good memory for things that interest me. However, I sometimes struggle to recall names or dates unless I write them down. Therefore, I usually make a list or take notes on my phone, which helps me remember important information more easily.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
점수: 70.0제안: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi và có ví dụ minh họa, tuy nhiên có lỗi từ vựng như "bike" thay vì "buy" và câu cuối "We can be quite inconvenient" không đúng ngữ pháp và ý nghĩa. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ chính xác và câu văn rõ ràng hơn. Hãy dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.
예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things quite often. For instance, when I go shopping, I sometimes forget to buy necessary groceries like milk and bread because I don't write them down. As a result, I have to return to the store later, which can be quite inconvenient.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
점수: 85.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, rõ ràng và có nội dung cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng thêm một chút về cách bạn quản lý việc nhớ các việc quan trọng. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý phát âm và ngữ điệu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
예시: On a daily basis, I need to remember many things such as homework tasks and personal events. Moreover, I try not to forget important days like birthdays or anniversaries. To help with this, I usually set reminders on my phone and write them down in a planner.
How do you remember important things?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng có lỗi lặp từ "forget to forget to make sure" và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa "These methods have made to stay organized and I need more time effectively." Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy và logic.
예시: I usually jot down important things on my phone or in a notebook. Sometimes, I set reminders to make sure I don't forget anything. These methods help me stay organized and manage my time more effectively.
문법
× And to have with this I usually make list or note everything on my phone which it makes it easier to remember important information.
✓ And to help with this, I usually make a list or note everything on my phone, which makes it easier to remember important information.
The phrase 'make list' is incorrect because 'list' is a countable noun and requires an article 'a' when singular. Also, 'to have with this' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to help with this'. Additionally, 'which it makes' is redundant; 'which makes' is correct.
× I sometimes forget to bike necessary groceries like milk and bread, because I don't write them down or make a list on my phone.
✓ I sometimes forget to buy necessary groceries like milk and bread, because I don't write them down or make a list on my phone.
The word 'bike' is a typo and should be 'buy'. This is not a grammar problem but a spelling error; however, it affects the meaning of the sentence.
× We can be quite inconvenient.
✓ It can be quite inconvenient.
The sentence 'We can be quite inconvenient' is incorrect because 'we' (people) cannot be 'inconvenient' in this context. The intended meaning is that the situation is inconvenient, so 'It can be quite inconvenient' is correct.
× Sometimes I set reminder to make sure I don't forget to forget to make sure I don't forget anything.
✓ Sometimes I set reminders to make sure I don't forget anything.
The sentence contains repetition 'to make sure I don't forget to forget to make sure I don't forget anything' which is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'reminder' should be plural 'reminders' to match the context.
× These methods have made to stay organized and I need more time effectively.
✓ These methods have helped me stay organized and manage my time more effectively.
The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Have made to stay organized' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have helped me stay organized'. Also, 'I need more time effectively' is incorrect; it should be 'manage my time more effectively'.
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