Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有语法错误，表达不够自然，且句子较长且重复。建议使用简单且正确的句子结构，避免冗余，并且用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. When I was a child, I could remember every detail my teacher taught in class. Now, as an adult, I can also recall schedules I make with my friends.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“forgot myself on the taxi”不自然。建议用更准确的表达，并使用连接词使叙述更流畅。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. Last year, on my way back to university, I left my phone in a taxi. Fortunately, the driver contacted me through my friend's phone, and I got it back. It was an unforgettable experience.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议直接回答问题，提供具体例子，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember many things. For example, I often make schedules to manage my time. Therefore, I have to remember what tasks to do at specific times to stay organized.

제안: 回答较好，但有重复和口语化表达。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I usually remember important things by writing them down on my phone or on paper. It is very convenient because my phone can remind me at specific times.

× Yeah, it's a really good at remembering things and when I was a kid I can remember every detail that teacher taught in the class.

✓ Yeah, I'm really good at remembering things and when I was a kid I could remember every detail that the teacher taught in the class.

The phrase 'it's a really good at remembering things' is incorrect because 'it' does not refer to a person and 'good at' should describe a person. The correct form is 'I'm really good at remembering things'. Also, 'I can remember' should be in past tense 'I could remember' to match 'when I was a kid'. Additionally, 'that teacher' needs the definite article 'the' before 'teacher'.

× And when I become an adult right now, I can also remember some schedule that I have made with my friends.

✓ And now that I have become an adult, I can also remember some schedules that I have made with my friends.

The phrase 'when I become an adult right now' is incorrect because 'become' should be in present perfect tense 'have become' to indicate a completed action relevant to now. Also, 'some schedule' should be plural 'some schedules' to agree with 'some'.

× Oh yes, I remember that. It was in my, it was on my way back to the university last year and I forgot myself on the taxi.

✓ Oh yes, I remember that. It was on my way back to the university last year and I forgot my phone in the taxi.

The phrase 'I forgot myself on the taxi' is incorrect because 'forgot myself' is not a correct expression. The intended meaning is likely 'I forgot my phone'. Also, the preposition 'on' should be 'in' when referring to being inside a taxi.

× But luckily the taxi driver contact me through my friend's phone and, and ultimately I got my phone.

✓ But luckily the taxi driver contacted me through my friend's phone and ultimately I got my phone.

The verb 'contact' should be in past tense 'contacted' to match the past time frame of the sentence.

× Personally, I have a lot of things to remember of my daily life.

✓ Personally, I have a lot of things to remember in my daily life.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to use with 'remember' in this context is 'in'.

× For example, I often make some schedules for myself.

✓ For example, I often make some schedule for myself.

The word 'schedule' is usually uncountable when referring to a plan of activities, so 'some schedules' should be 'some schedule' or better 'a schedule'.

× So, you know, I have to remember what to do in a specific time and so I can. So OK, that's it.

✓ So, you know, I have to remember what to do at a specific time, and that's it.

The phrase 'and so I can' is incomplete and unclear. Also, 'in a specific time' should be 'at a specific time' to indicate a point in time.

× Personally, I will write the important things on my phone or on the paper and usually on my phones.

✓ Personally, I write important things on my phone or on paper, and usually on my phone.

The phrase 'the important things' can be simplified to 'important things'. Also, 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' as a general reference. 'My phones' should be singular 'my phone'.

× And you know, it is really convenient to write down on the phone and sometimes my phone will always remind me to do the important things in some specific time.

✓ And you know, it is really convenient to write things down on the phone, and sometimes my phone always reminds me to do important things at specific times.

The phrase 'write down on the phone' is missing the object 'things'. 'Will always remind' is better as 'always reminds' for habitual action. 'The important things' can be 'important things'. 'In some specific time' should be 'at specific times'.