Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения, что снижает его естественность и эффективность. Рекомендуется использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, избегать лишних слов и улучшить связность речи.

예시: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. Every day, I try to learn new words and repeat them to remember better. However, as people get older, their memory can become weaker, making it harder to memorize things.

제안: Ответ понятен, но содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Рекомендуется улучшить грамматику, использовать связующие слова и более точные выражения для повышения ясности и естественности.

예시: Yes, I once forgot an important event about two years ago during the Olympic selection process. I missed the exact time and arrived late. Since then, someone advised me to write important things in a notebook, and I haven't forgotten anything important after that.

제안: Ответ содержит много ошибок и неясных выражений, что затрудняет понимание. Рекомендуется использовать простые и четкие предложения, избегать лишних слов и улучшить структуру ответа.

예시: I need to remember many things every day. Before, I often forgot my tasks, but now I write important information in a notebook. This helps me keep track of important dates and work, so I don't miss anything important.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения, что снижает его естественность. Рекомендуется использовать правильные грамматические конструкции, связующие слова и более точные формулировки.

예시: To remember important things, I write them down in a notebook. For example, I note all my appointments and tasks, which makes it easier for me to stay organized and not forget anything.

× Every day I tried to learn new words and by repeating them everyday I memorized them.

✓ Every day I try to learn new words and by repeating them every day I memorize them.

The sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense should be used instead of the past tense. 'Tried' and 'memorized' should be 'try' and 'memorize' to indicate ongoing daily practice.

× However. By the time and Asia memory, memory itself gets weak enough so for.

✓ However, over time, memory itself becomes weak enough, especially for older people.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'By the time and Asia memory' is incorrect and replaced with 'over time'. 'Gets weak enough so for' is corrected to 'becomes weak enough, especially for'.

× Old people, it may be difficult to memorize things.

✓ For old people, it may be difficult to memorize things.

The sentence lacks a preposition 'For' at the beginning to correctly relate 'old people' to the difficulty in memorizing. Also, 'Old people' should be part of a prepositional phrase.

× I once forgot something important about two years ago during the Olympic selection process.

✓ I once forgot something important about two years ago during the Olympic selection process.

This sentence is correct in past tense as it refers to a specific event in the past. No correction needed.

× since then I have not forgetting anything important.

✓ since then I have not forgotten anything important.

The verb 'forgetting' is incorrect here; the past participle 'forgotten' should be used with 'have' to form the present perfect tense.

× Before, I used to forget what I had to do, but fortunately, someone advised me to write down important information in the notebook and things.

✓ Before, I used to forget what I had to do, but fortunately, someone advised me to write down important information in a notebook.

The phrase 'and things' is vague and unnecessary. Also, 'the notebook' should be 'a notebook' as it is not previously specified.

× Then I have made it happy to keep track of all crucial days and employment, which has helped me award for getting anything important.

✓ Then I have been able to keep track of all crucial dates and appointments, which has helped me avoid missing anything important.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect word choices like 'made it happy' and 'award for getting'. It is corrected for clarity and proper vocabulary.

× I write the things I need to do in a notebook.

✓ I write the things I need to do in a notebook.

This sentence is correct; no pronoun error detected.

× if I need to do something so crucial, I take a notebook and write their all the appointments I need to do so.

✓ If I need to do something crucial, I take a notebook and write down all the appointments I need to attend.

'Their all the appointments' is incorrect; 'their' is a plural possessive pronoun not fitting here. Also, 'write their all' is incorrect word order. Corrected to 'write down all the appointments'.

× This makes my job much more easier.

✓ This makes my job much easier.

'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective. 'Much easier' is the correct form.

× And better to remain.

✓ And it is better to remember.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It is corrected to a complete sentence with proper subject and verb.