Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer clearer and more organized. Use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific reasons or examples. Also, avoid filler words like 'and yeah'.

예시: I used to be good at memorizing things, but recently, stress and anxiety have made it harder for me to remember. For example, I often forget small tasks because my mind is busy with worries.

제안: Improve your sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Be more specific about what you forget and how your list helps you. Avoid grammatical errors like 'can't forget' when you mean 'don't forget'.

예시: Yes, I often forget important things, especially tasks my mom asks me to do. To manage this, I make a checklist before starting any task, so I don't forget anything important.

제안: Try to organize your answer better and use linking words. Clarify your routine and how you remember tasks. Avoid repetition like 'I write down, I write it down'.

예시: I don't have a fixed daily routine, but whenever I have tasks, I write them down. Then, I make sure to complete them before the day ends.

제안: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Be specific about your methods and avoid repetition or unclear phrases.

예시: I always carry a pen and notebook to write down important tasks. Additionally, I use my phone's calendar to set reminders. Sometimes, I also ask my mom or someone else to remind me about important things.

× Before I was good at memorizing things, but you too my in ciety and stress.

✓ Before, I was good at memorizing things, but you took me into anxiety and stress.

The original sentence uses 'too' instead of the past tense verb 'took', which is incorrect. The verb 'take' in past tense is 'took'. Also, 'in ciety' seems to be a misspelling of 'anxiety'. Correcting these makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× I think that I tend to forgot a lot of things already at a very young age and yeah.

✓ I think that I tended to forget a lot of things already at a very young age.

The verb 'tend' should be in past tense 'tended' to match the past time reference. Also, 'forgot' is the past tense, but after 'tended to' the base form 'forget' should be used. The phrase 'and yeah' is informal and unnecessary here.

× Yes, I do think that I forgot a lot of things that are very important, specially the ones at my mom asked me to do.

✓ Yes, I do think that I forget a lot of things that are very important, especially the ones my mom asked me to do.

The phrase 'I forgot' is past tense, but the context suggests a present habitual action, so 'I forget' is correct. 'Specially' is a misspelling of 'especially'. The phrase 'at my mom asked me' is incorrect; it should be 'my mom asked me'.

× But to help to cope up with this, I have a list on what to do before doing a particular task so that I can't forget the important things that I need.

✓ But to help cope with this, I have a list of what to do before doing a particular task so that I don't forget the important things that I need.

The phrase 'cope up with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cope with'. Also, 'a list on what to do' should be 'a list of what to do'. 'Can't forget' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'don't forget' to express intention.

× As he asked me, I don't have a fixed routine I usually do anything in. A day, but when I do have a task I write down, I write it down and make sure to do it and finish it before the day would end.

✓ As he asked me, I don't have a fixed routine that I usually follow in a day, but when I do have a task, I write it down and make sure to do it and finish it before the day ends.

The original sentence has poor structure and misplaced phrases. 'I usually do anything in. A day' is fragmented and unclear. It is corrected to 'a fixed routine that I usually follow in a day'. Also, 'before the day would end' is changed to 'before the day ends' for correct tense and clarity.

× I always keep me with a pen and notebook so that I could this down the important tests should I do and also I should I write it down in my calendar in my phone which is very handy.

✓ I always keep a pen and notebook with me so that I can write down the important tasks I should do, and I also write them down in the calendar on my phone, which is very handy.

The phrase 'keep me with' is incorrect; it should be 'keep ... with me'. 'Could this down' is incorrect; it should be 'can write down'. 'Tests' is likely a typo for 'tasks'. 'Should I do' is awkward; 'I should do' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Also I asked my mom or somebody to remind me that I should do some things.

✓ Also, I ask my mom or somebody to remind me to do some things.

The verb 'asked' is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so 'ask' is correct. 'That I should do some things' is awkward; 'to do some things' is clearer and more natural.