Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 문법 오류와 어휘 선택에 주의가 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'peoples name' 대신 'people's names'를 사용하고, 'forgot the mic'는 의미가 불분명하므로 'often forget where I put my keys and wallet'로 수정하는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 문장을 5문장 이내로 간결하게 유지하세요.

예시: It depends on the situation. I am good at remembering people's names and faces, but I often forget where I put my keys and wallet.

제안: 문법과 표현에 오류가 있습니다. 'No I don't'는 질문에 맞지 않고, 'gods important things'는 'God's'가 아니라 'good' 혹은 'most'가 적절합니다. 또한, 'write a planner' 대신 'use a planner app'가 자연스럽습니다. 문장을 명확하고 간결하게 고쳐보세요.

예시: No, I haven't. Usually, for important things, I use a planner app on my phone, which helps me remember what I need to do.

제안: 답변이 명확하지만, 문법과 연결어 사용에 개선이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'even I'm busy'는 'even when I'm busy'로 수정하고, 'because' 대신 'so that'을 사용해 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만드세요.

예시: I need to remember birthdays and family events in my daily life so that I can make time for my friends and family even when I'm busy.

제안: 문장이 어색하고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 'Are usually use'는 'I usually use'로 수정하고, 'it is. Convenience.'는 자연스럽게 연결하여 'because it is convenient.'로 표현하세요. 또한, 'track of the dates'는 'keep track of dates'가 맞습니다.

예시: I usually use my smartphone to remember important things because it is convenient. Also, I use calendar apps to keep track of important dates.

× I am good at remembering the peoples name and faces, but I usually forgot the mic where I put my keys and wallet.

✓ I am good at remembering people's names and faces, but I usually forget where I put my keys and wallet.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect; the correct plural possessive form is 'people's'. Also, 'name' should be plural 'names' to match 'people'. 'Forgot' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'forget'. 'Mic' seems to be a typo and should be removed for clarity.

× I am good at remembering the peoples name and faces, but I usually forgot the mic where I put my keys and wallet.

✓ I am good at remembering people's names and faces, but I usually forget where I put my keys and wallet.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense, but the adverb 'usually' indicates a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' is appropriate.

× No I don't. Usually for gods important things I write a planner in my phone and it helps remember that what I needed.

✓ No, I don't. Usually, for God's important things, I write a planner on my phone and it helps me remember what I need.

The phrase 'helps remember that what I needed' is incorrect. It should be 'helps me remember what I need' to correctly use the modal verb and pronouns. Also, 'gods' should be 'God's' to indicate possession.

× Usually for gods important things I write a planner in my phone and it helps remember that what I needed.

✓ Usually, for God's important things, I write a planner on my phone and it helps me remember what I need.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to writing on a phone; 'on my phone' is correct. Also, 'planner' should be 'a planner' or 'a plan'.

× I think I need to remember the birthdays or family events in my daily life because I can make time for my friends or family even I'm busy.

✓ I think I need to remember birthdays or family events in my daily life because I can make time for my friends or family even when I'm busy.

The definite article 'the' before 'birthdays' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Also, 'even I'm busy' is missing 'when' to connect the clauses properly.

× I think I need to remember the birthdays or family events in my daily life because I can make time for my friends or family even I'm busy.

✓ I think I need to remember birthdays or family events in my daily life because I can make time for my friends or family even when I'm busy.

The conjunction 'even' should be followed by 'when' to form the correct phrase 'even when I'm busy'.

× Are usually use my smartphone to remember important things it is. Convenience. Also I can use the calendar apps and track of the dates.

✓ I usually use my smartphone to remember important things because it is convenient. Also, I can use calendar apps to keep track of the dates.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing words. 'Are usually use' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually use'. 'It is. Convenience.' is a fragment and should be combined into 'because it is convenient'. 'Track of the dates' should be 'keep track of the dates'.