Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Not adult”不符合英语习惯，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，同时避免冗余。

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially vocabulary. For example, I often find it hard to remember new words unless I repeat them several times or use them in sentences. To improve, I usually make flashcards to help me remember better.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不连贯，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意时态一致，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I once forgot to bring my ID card when I went to the railway station. It was very stressful because I couldn't buy a ticket without it. If I had gone back to get it, I would have missed the best train connection.

제안: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“remember myself of tasks”不正确。建议使用正确的表达方式，句子简洁且逻辑清晰，避免混淆不同内容。

예시: I need to remember many things every day. For example, I keep track of tasks I have to complete and new vocabulary I have learned. Besides that, I also cherish important memories, like the love from my friends and family, which makes me feel happy and motivated.

제안: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单句子，明确表达记忆方法，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: I usually make a list or keep a diary to write down important things I need to remember during the day. For example, I note kind actions from others or new vocabulary I have learned. This method helps me organize my thoughts and ensures I don't forget anything important.

× Not adult.

✓ Not at all.

这里的表达应为否定副词短语，'Not adult'没有意义，正确表达是否定回答，应该用'Not at all'。

× I'm not good at memorizing things IK, specially vocabulary.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things, especially vocabulary.

'specially'是错误的拼写，应为'adverb' 'especially'，表示特别是。

× Because of this I usually tried other methods like making flash cards to help me remember better.

✓ Because of this I usually try other methods like making flash cards to help me remember better.

句子中使用了'usually'表示习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时'try'，而不是过去时'tried'。

× I once forgot to bring my ID card when I went in the railway station.

✓ I once forgot to bring my ID card when I went to the railway station.

介词用法错误，'go in'不符合习惯表达，正确用法是'go to'某地。

× Well, what was very stressful because without it I can buy the ticket, but if I went back to get it.

✓ Well, it was very stressful because without it I couldn't buy the ticket, but if I went back to get it,

句子结构不完整且时态错误，'what'应为'it'，'can'应改为过去时'could'，并且句子需要连接词。

× It would make him miss the best time change so.

✓ It would make me miss the best time to change trains.

句子结构混乱，'him'应为'me'，'best time change'表达不完整，需补充'to change trains'使句意明确。

× There are many things I need to remember in my daily life.

✓ There are many things I need to remember in my daily life.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I often remember myself of tasks I have to complete each day in new vocabulary I learned.

✓ I often remind myself of tasks I have to complete each day and new vocabulary I have learned.

'remember myself of'用法错误，应为'remind myself of'，且连接词和时态需调整。

× Beside this, more things are also cherish important memories like the love of my friends and parents which always made me feel happy and motivated.

✓ Besides this, there are also cherished important memories like the love of my friends and parents which always make me feel happy and motivated.

'Beside'应为'Besides'表示此外，'more things are also cherish'结构错误，应改为'there are also cherished'，时态和主谓一致需调整。

× Are usually made the list of keyboard diary to write down important things I need to remember throughout the day.

✓ I usually make a list in my diary to write down important things I need to remember throughout the day.

句子主语缺失，'Are usually made'错误，应为'I usually make'，时态和语态错误。

× For example, are rolled down kind actions from others or new vocabulary vocabulary I learned.

✓ For example, I write down kind actions from others or new vocabulary I have learned.

句子缺主语且表达混乱，'are rolled down'错误，应为'I write down'，重复单词'vocabulary'需删除，时态调整。

× This method helped me organize my thought and ensure I don't forget anything important.

✓ This method helps me organize my thoughts and ensures I don't forget anything important.

描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时，'helped'改为'helps'，'thought'应为复数'thoughts'，主谓一致需调整。