Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。特に、繰り返しや不完全な文が目立ちます。より自然な英語表現を使い、具体的な例を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially when it comes to topics I enjoy. For example, I can easily remember the names of sports players because I follow their games closely.

제안: 内容が不明瞭で、文が断片的です。質問に直接答え、具体的な状況を説明する練習が必要です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、意味を明確にしましょう。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, I once forgot a promise to my friend to go to the theater together, which made me feel very sorry.

제안: 回答が断片的で意味が伝わりにくいです。日常生活で覚えるべきことを具体的に述べ、文を完結させる練習をしましょう。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my daily tasks and the subjects I need to study to prepare for exams.

제안: 文が非常に不明瞭で、意味が伝わりません。重要なことを覚える方法を明確に述べ、文法的に正しい文章を作る練習が必要です。

예시: I usually write important things as notes on my phone and check them frequently, especially after I wake up in the morning.

× I'm glad to memorize, especially in my favorite things.

✓ I'm glad to memorize, especially my favorite things.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used here. The phrase should be 'especially my favorite things' without 'in' to correctly express the idea.

× For example, I I good at memorizing.

✓ For example, I am good at memorizing.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' to complete the sentence structure. Also, the repeated 'I' is an error.

× A sports prayers name.

✓ The names of sports players.

The phrase 'sports prayers name' is incorrect. It should be plural 'players' and 'names' to match the context.

× Yes, I hope I forgot.

✓ Yes, I hope I haven't forgotten.

The use of 'forgot' is past tense, but the context suggests present perfect 'haven't forgotten' to express experience up to now.

× I was. I I have a whole lot.

✓ I have forgotten a whole lot.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be a complete sentence expressing the idea of forgetting many things.

× The promise to my friend we.

✓ I promised my friend.

The sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. It should be a clear subject-verb-object sentence.

× We are prompted to go to the theater.

✓ We were supposed to go to the theater.

The phrase 'are prompted' is incorrect in this context. 'Were supposed to' correctly expresses an obligation or plan in the past.

× I need to remember. Deti tasks and.

✓ I need to remember daily tasks and...

The sentence is incomplete and 'Deti' seems to be a typo for 'daily'. The sentence should be completed for clarity.

× What needed to? Study and.

✓ What I need to study and...

The sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. It should be a complete clause.

× I also think. Dude.

✓ I also think...

The word 'Dude' is out of place and the sentence is incomplete.

× I often take are not in my phone and.

✓ I often take notes on my phone and...

The phrase 'take are not' is incorrect. It should be 'take notes' and 'on my phone' is the correct preposition.

× I keep checking.

✓ I keep checking them.

The sentence is incomplete; the object of 'checking' is missing.

× After I got up, get up in the morning.

✓ After I get up in the morning.

The sentence is redundant and incorrectly structured; 'got up' and 'get up' are mixed. Present tense 'get up' fits better here.