Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors such as "memory rising" instead of "memorizing" and "gotta pull memory" which is informal and confusing. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by directly stating your approach to memorizing. Use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things, so I usually rely on my phone to jot down important tasks. This helps me remember what I need to do without forgetting anything.

제안: Your answer has several unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes, such as "recency effort gots to bring" and "seat dry and comfortable." Try to use simple and correct sentences. Also, provide specific details and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I once forgot to bring my umbrella on a rainy day in Hong Kong, which was very inconvenient because it had been raining a lot. This experience made me realize how important it is to remember essential items, especially during the rainy season.

제안: Your answer is relevant and provides specific details about your job. However, there are some grammatical errors such as "keep track on" instead of "keep track of," and "patience" instead of "patients." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I need to remember many important things daily, especially at work since I'm a nurse in a hospital. For example, I have to keep track of various tasks and specific treatments prescribed by doctors. Remembering these details is crucial to ensure that patients receive the right care and medication on time.

제안: Your answer explains your method but contains errors like "just them down" instead of "jot them down," and unclear phrases like "ICE can easily assist." Try to use clear and correct expressions. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: To remember important things, I usually use the Notes app on my phone to jot them down. This method is very convenient because I can easily access my notes anytime. It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

× I don't think I'm very good at memory rising.

✓ I don't think I'm very good at memorizing.

The phrase 'memory rising' is incorrect. The correct gerund form of the verb 'memorize' is 'memorizing'. Using the correct verb form improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Things I always need, I gotta pull memory, so I always need to use my phone to jot down some of the tasks that I have to do.

✓ For things I always need, I have to recall from memory, so I always use my phone to jot down some of the tasks that I have to do.

The phrase 'I gotta pull memory' is informal and unclear. Replacing it with 'I have to recall from memory' is more appropriate. Also, 'gotta' is informal and should be replaced with 'have to' in formal contexts.

× Yes, definitely recency effort gots to bring my umbrella on the rainy day in Hong Kong, which was quite inconvenient since it has been raining a lot lately.

✓ Yes, recently I forgot to bring my umbrella on a rainy day in Hong Kong, which was quite inconvenient since it has been raining a lot lately.

The original sentence contains incorrect words and tense usage. 'Recency effort gots to bring' is incorrect. The correct past tense phrase is 'I forgot to bring'. Also, 'the rainy day' should be 'a rainy day' to indicate any rainy day.

× Having an umbrella is essential to seat dry and comfortable.

✓ Having an umbrella is essential to stay dry and comfortable.

The phrase 'seat dry' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'stay' to indicate remaining in a state. 'Stay dry and comfortable' is the correct expression.

× I have to keep track on various task and specific treatments that the doctors prescribed to the patience.

✓ I have to keep track of various tasks and specific treatments that the doctors prescribed to the patients.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'various'. Also, 'patience' is incorrect; the correct plural noun is 'patients'. Additionally, the preposition 'on' should be 'of' after 'keep track'.

× I have to keep track on various task and specific treatments that the doctors prescribed to the patience.

✓ I have to keep track of various tasks and specific treatments that the doctors prescribed to the patients.

The phrase 'keep track on' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'of' after 'keep track'. This correction improves grammatical accuracy.

× And remembering all these details is crucial to ensure that patient receive the right care and medication on time.

✓ And remembering all these details is crucial to ensure that patients receive the right care and medication on time.

The noun 'patient' should be plural 'patients' to agree with the plural verb 'receive'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and correct noun form.

× For important things that I need to remember, I usually open the Notes app on my phone to just them down.

✓ For important things that I need to remember, I usually open the Notes app on my phone to jot them down.

The phrase 'just them down' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'jot them down', meaning to write something quickly. This correction improves clarity and correctness.

× This method is very convenient because ICE can easily assist and refer to my notes anytime.

✓ This method is very convenient because I can easily access and refer to my notes anytime.

The word 'ICE' is likely a typo for 'I'. Also, 'assist' is incorrect in this context; 'access' is the correct verb to indicate retrieving notes. This correction clarifies the meaning.

× Anna sure I don't forget anything important.

✓ And ensure I don't forget anything important.

The phrase 'Anna sure' is incorrect and likely a typo for 'and ensure'. Correcting this improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.