Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa không được truyền đạt một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm một vài chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên quan để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I have a strong memory. For example, I can easily recall important dates and facts. However, when I am very busy, I sometimes forget small tasks I need to do.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ câu trả lời.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, especially when I have many tasks to do. For instance, when I feel overwhelmed, my brain doesn't work well, and I tend to forget some important duties.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời đầy đủ hơn.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like the time to go to school and the tasks I have to do after school, such as doing homework and helping my parents with household chores.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về cách bạn ghi nhớ các việc quan trọng.

예시: I am generally good at remembering things, so I don't often use many tools. However, when I have many priorities, I usually take notes on my phone, which helps me remember important tasks.

× I've only be yes because I think I was born with this own memory skills so I can easily recall information or data or death easily.

✓ I've only been yes because I think I was born with my own memory skills so I can easily recall information or data or details easily.

The verb 'be' should be in the past participle form 'been' after 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Also, 'this own memory skills' is incorrect; it should be 'my own memory skills' to correctly use the possessive pronoun.

× I've only be yes because I think I was born with this own memory skills so I can easily recall information or data or death easily.

✓ I've only been yes because I think I was born with my own memory skills so I can easily recall information or data or details easily.

The word 'death' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'details' to make sense. Also, 'this own' is incorrect; it should be 'my own' to correctly express possession.

× Sometime when I'm too busy I may often forget something I have to do.

✓ Sometimes when I'm too busy, I may often forget something I have to do.

The word 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory phrase for clarity.

× Just of course until they are sometimes they are many tasks or work that I have to do.

✓ Just of course, sometimes there are many tasks or work that I have to do.

The phrase 'until they are sometimes they are' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'sometimes there are' to correctly express the existence of tasks. Also, a comma is needed after 'Just of course'.

× So if you can make me feel overwhelming and all coast rest for me.

✓ So if it can make me feel overwhelmed and all cost rest for me.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here; it should be 'it' referring to the situation. Also, 'overwhelming' should be 'overwhelmed' to describe the feeling. 'All coast rest' is unclear and likely a mishearing; possibly 'all costs rest' or 'all causes rest' but unclear.

× So it's a time that my brain does not work all fully.

✓ So it's a time when my brain does not work fully.

The phrase 'all fully' is incorrect; 'fully' alone is sufficient. Also, 'that' should be 'when' to refer to a time.

× So I usually forgot usually forget every something when I do.

✓ So I usually forget everything when I do.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'forget'. Also, 'every something' is incorrect; it should be 'everything'.

× Well, they are not so many thing I have to memorize or image I like.

✓ Well, there are not so many things I have to memorize or imagine I like.

'They are' should be 'there are' to indicate existence. 'thing' should be plural 'things'. 'image' should be 'imagine' to make sense.

× I just need to remember the time to go to school but have to do after finish school by doing homework or help my parents with helpful Charles.

✓ I just need to remember the time to go to school and what I have to do after finishing school, like doing homework or helping my parents with helpful chores.

The sentence has several preposition and word choice errors: 'but have to do after finish school' should be 'and what I have to do after finishing school'. 'help my parents with helpful Charles' is incorrect; 'helpful chores' is likely intended.

× Well, honestly, I think I'm quite good at memorizing things, so I think I don't really need men need to use many tools to help me or remember important things in my diary by but sometimes when they are many priorities, I usually measure to take notes on my phone and that will remind me oh.

✓ Well, honestly, I think I'm quite good at memorizing things, so I don't really need to use many tools to help me remember important things in my diary. But sometimes when there are many priorities, I usually make notes on my phone and that will remind me.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'men need' should be 'to need' or removed; 'by but' is incorrect; 'they are many priorities' should be 'there are many priorities'; 'measure to take notes' should be 'make notes'. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.