Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Use simple, correct sentences and provide specific examples if possible.

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember dates, appointments, and important times without much effort.

제안: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. However, I usually remember important tasks and only forget small things, like adding sugar to my tea sometimes.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Use complete sentences with proper grammar and linking words to connect ideas. Be specific about what you remember and how you do it.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember meetings, appointments, and tasks. Therefore, I check my emails regularly and keep a schedule to ensure I complete everything on time.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your methods using linking words. Be specific and concise.

예시: To remember important things, I set alarms on my phone and write notes. Also, I ask my family members to remind me in case my phone is not working.

× Just like yes I can see I'm good remembering things I can easily remind states, Oks and timing.

✓ Just like yes, I can see I'm good at remembering things. I can easily recall dates, tasks, and timing.

The phrase 'good remembering things' requires the preposition 'at' before the gerund 'remembering' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'remind states, Oks and timing' is unclear; 'recall dates, tasks, and timing' is more appropriate and clear.

× Actually forgot.

✓ Actually, I forgot.

The sentence lacks a subject and auxiliary verb. Adding 'I' and a comma makes it a complete past tense sentence.

× Doing mistakes is a part of the home in life.

✓ Making mistakes is a part of life at home.

'Doing mistakes' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'making mistakes'. Also, 'a part of the home in life' is awkward; 'a part of life at home' is clearer.

× There is a lot of time when I forget something, but I can.

✓ There are many times when I forget something, but I can remember them.

'There is a lot of time' is incorrect; 'There are many times' is appropriate for countable instances. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'remember them' clarifies the meaning.

× I can't select those are the important things because I'm very good remember the important things.

✓ I can't select which are the important things because I'm very good at remembering the important things.

The sentence lacks 'which' to introduce the clause and the preposition 'at' before 'remembering'. Also, 'select those are' is incorrect; 'select which are' is correct.

× I just always forget the silly things like putting the sugar in the tea.

✓ I just always forget silly things like putting sugar in the tea.

'The silly things' is better as 'silly things' in this context. Also, 'putting the sugar' should be 'putting sugar' as sugar is uncountable here.

× There's a lot of things which I. Trying to remember in my daily life like if I have any meeting I have any schedule an appointment, I only check my emails, scroll up like so that I will be doing my task on time and I will never miss even a single things in my daily life.

✓ There are a lot of things which I try to remember in my daily life, like if I have any meeting, any schedule, or an appointment. I only check my emails and scroll through them so that I can do my tasks on time and never miss even a single thing in my daily life.

'There's a lot of things' should be 'There are a lot of things' because 'things' is plural. 'Trying' should be 'try' to match the present tense. 'Single things' should be 'single thing' as 'single' modifies a singular noun.

× I only check my emails, scroll up like so that I will be doing my task on time and I will never miss even a single things in my daily life.

✓ I only check my emails and scroll through them so that I can do my tasks on time and never miss even a single thing in my daily life.

'Scroll up like' is unclear; 'scroll through them' is more appropriate. 'Will be doing' is better as 'can do' to express ability and intention. 'Single things' should be 'single thing'.

× There is a lot of thing which I don't remember my important things.

✓ There are a lot of things which I don't remember about my important things.

'There is a lot of thing' should be 'There are a lot of things' because 'things' is plural. Also, the sentence is awkward; adding 'about' clarifies the meaning.

× The first thing I shut up alarm in my phone or make a notepad.

✓ The first thing I do is set an alarm on my phone or make a note.

'Shut up alarm' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'set an alarm'. Also, 'make a notepad' should be 'make a note'.

× Secondly I tell my family members if I forgotten my mobile phone is not working so just remind me for those days.

✓ Secondly, I tell my family members that if I forget and my mobile phone is not working, they should remind me on those days.

The sentence lacks proper conjunctions and verb forms. 'If I forgotten' should be 'if I forget'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.