Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using correct sentence structures. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things because I tend to forget information quickly. For example, when I study, I often forget what I learned after a short time.

제안: Your answer is confusing and incomplete, making it hard to understand. Use clear sentences and provide specific details about the event. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, once I forgot to bring my identity card when I was at the airport, which caused me a lot of trouble.

제안: Your answer lacks coherence and complete sentences. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer logical and natural.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to keep my kids safe and close to me. Sometimes, I forget where I put their belongings, so I try to be more careful.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use correct sentence structures and explain your method clearly with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: To remember important things, I write notes on my iPhone. Before I go out, I check these notes to make sure I don't forget anything important.

× Like when I study in you.

✓ Like when I study, for example.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear, lacking proper sentence structure. It needs to be rephrased to form a complete and meaningful sentence.

× Things are both.

✓ Things are both confusing and difficult to remember.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs additional information to clarify what 'both' refers to, forming a complete thought.

× I have further telling many things that were important to me and one of them was when I was in.

✓ I have forgotten many things that were important to me, and one of them was when I was at the airport.

The original sentence contains unclear phrases and incomplete ideas. 'Further telling' is incorrect; 'forgotten' is appropriate. Also, 'when I was in' is incomplete and needs a location.

× Doing airport I forgot to bring my identity card.

✓ At the airport, I forgot to bring my identity card.

The phrase 'Doing airport' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'At the airport' to indicate location.

× It made me his rest out easily and I was so.

✓ It made me stressed out easily, and I was very upset.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words. 'His rest out' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'stressed out'.

× In my daily life, I need to remember.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember many things.

The sentence is incomplete and needs an object to complete the thought.

× To keep my kids. Safe and around me, I quickly forget where I put them up.

✓ To keep my kids safe and around me, I need to remember where I put their things because I quickly forget.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be combined and clarified for meaning.

× And the most important thing to remember?

✓ And what is the most important thing to remember?

The original is a fragment and should be a complete question.

× Two remember important things in my life I write down the important things to do in north that is available in my iPhone and I usually take the north before I.

✓ To remember important things in my life, I write down the important tasks in the notes app available on my iPhone, and I usually check the notes before I go out.

The sentence contains multiple errors: 'Two' should be 'To'; 'north' should be 'notes'; the sentence is incomplete and needs to be restructured for clarity.

× Go out on do something and he tells me to remember things.

✓ Go out or do something, and it helps me remember things.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and conjunctions. It needs to be rephrased for clarity and correctness.