Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear, complete sentence directly answering the question, then add a reason or example. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially since the COVID-19 pandemic started. During that time, I noticed my memory skills declined because I was less active and more distracted.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but is fragmented and has grammar mistakes. Use complete sentences and link your ideas logically. Also, try to explain the situation clearly and briefly.

예시: Yes, I once forgot to take an online midterm test at my secondary school because I overslept that morning. As a result, I failed the test, which was very disappointing.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to form full sentences and explain your habits clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid abrupt endings.

예시: In my daily life, I usually write down my tasks in the notes app on my phone. This helps me remember what I need to do each day. Whenever I realize I have something important, I make a note of it immediately.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but is fragmented and contains grammar errors. Use complete sentences and link your ideas clearly. Also, be careful with word choice and sentence structure.

예시: I usually write down all important tasks and set alarms on my phone to remind me. This method helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

× Unfortunately that I'm not good at memorizing things because after.

✓ Unfortunately, I'm not good at memorizing things.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured. 'Unfortunately that I'm not good at memorizing things because after.' lacks a main verb and a clear object. The phrase 'because after' is incomplete and confusing. The corrected sentence removes the incomplete phrase and adds a comma after 'Unfortunately' for clarity.

× During the Chobit 19 I. Reduce. The ability to memory memorize everything around.

✓ During COVID-19, I reduced my ability to memorize everything around.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and awkward phrasing. 'I. Reduce.' is incorrect; it should be past tense 'I reduced'. 'The ability to memory memorize' is redundant and incorrect; 'memory' is a noun, and 'memorize' is the verb. The corrected sentence uses past tense 'reduced' and corrects the phrase to 'my ability to memorize'.

× Also. I have other.

✓ Also, I have other issues.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. 'Also. I have other.' is a fragment. The correction adds an object 'issues' to complete the sentence and uses a comma after 'Also'.

× Yes, I once forgot to do the mid term test.

✓ Yes, I once forgot to take the midterm test.

The verb 'do' is less appropriate here; 'take' is the correct verb collocated with 'test'. Also, 'mid term' should be one word 'midterm'. The past tense 'forgot' is correct.

× Which happens online at my secondary school.

✓ It happened online at my secondary school.

Starting a sentence with 'Which' is incorrect here because it is a relative pronoun that should refer to a previous noun. The sentence is a fragment. The correction makes it a complete sentence with subject 'It' and past tense verb 'happened'.

× Because I overslept that morning and cannot wake up from dreams.

✓ Because I overslept that morning and could not wake up from dreams.

The sentence mixes past tense 'overslept' with present tense 'cannot'. Both actions happened in the past, so 'could not' is appropriate. Also, 'wake up from dreams' is acceptable but could be better phrased as 'wake up from sleep'.

× Which leads to the failure.

✓ This led to failure.

Again, starting with 'Which' creates a fragment. Changing to 'This led to failure.' makes a complete sentence with subject and past tense verb consistent with previous sentences.

× In my daily life, I usually have to write down.

✓ In my daily life, I usually have to write things down.

The verb 'write down' requires an object. The original sentence ends abruptly without specifying what is written down. The correction adds 'things' to complete the sentence.

× In the notes app in my phone.

✓ I write them in the Notes app on my phone.

This is a sentence fragment lacking a subject and verb. The correction forms a complete sentence explaining where the notes are written.

× About what I have to do in that day also.

✓ About what I have to do that day as well.

This is a fragment and awkwardly phrased. The correction integrates it into a complete sentence and uses 'that day' instead of 'in that day' and 'as well' instead of 'also' at the end.

× When I realized I need to do something, I would immediately. Natural.

✓ When I realize I need to do something, I immediately act on it naturally.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency ('realized' past vs 'need' present) and incomplete phrases ('I would immediately. Natural.'). The correction uses present tense 'realize' to match habitual action, completes the sentence with 'act on it naturally'.

× My choice was to write down all the important tax and set all the alarms.

✓ My choice was to write down all the important tasks and set all the alarms.

The word 'tax' is a typo or incorrect word; it should be 'tasks'. 'All the important tasks' is the correct quantifier usage here.

× On to remind me of important.

✓ to remind me of important things.

The phrase 'On to remind me of important.' is incomplete and incorrectly structured. The correction completes the phrase with 'things' and removes the unnecessary 'On'.

× Things. Help me stay organized in ensure that I don't forget anything important.

✓ These things help me stay organized and ensure that I don't forget anything important.

The original has sentence fragments and incorrect conjunctions. 'Things.' is a fragment. 'in ensure' is incorrect; it should be 'and ensure'. The correction combines into a complete sentence with proper conjunction.