Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，表达重复。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用一两个具体例子支持。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget important tasks, so I usually write notes to help me remember.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的时态和更清晰的表达，同时增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, during my last semester, I forgot an important meeting with my mentor. Also, sometimes I forget to attend online final exams.

제안: 回答中有词汇错误（如'loud'），句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用准确词汇，简洁表达，并用连接词组织句子。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my school schedule. For example, I must know which classes I have each day and what materials to bring.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但句子连接不够自然，时态使用不一致。建议使用连词使表达更流畅，并保持时态一致。

예시: Since I often forget important things, I have tried many methods. Firstly, I write notes on paper to remind myself. Secondly, I use the calendar app on my smartphone, which I find very useful.

× No, I often forget some important things while they're in my study or in my life, so I can always take some notes to remind me of the important things.

✓ No, I often forget some important things while they're in my studies or in my life, so I can always take some notes to remind me of the important things.

“study”在这里应使用复数形式“studies”，表示学习的各个方面或课程。单复数错误导致表达不准确。

× Yes, in the last master I forgot an important meeting with my mentor and sometimes I even forget some final exams online.

✓ Yes, during my last master's program I forgot an important meeting with my mentor and sometimes I even forget some final exams online.

“in the last master”表达不准确，应为“during my last master's program”表示在上一个硕士阶段。时态上“forgot”正确，但表达更自然。

× Yes, in the last master I forgot an important meeting with my mentor and sometimes I even forget some final exams online.

✓ Yes, during my last master's program I forgot an important meeting with my mentor and sometimes I even forget some final exams online.

介词“in”用法不当，描述时间段时应使用“during”。

× I think I really need to remember loud in my daily life as I need to go to my school every day.

✓ I think I really need to remember a lot in my daily life as I need to go to my school every day.

“loud”是形容词，意思是“响亮的”，此处应使用“a lot”表示“很多”，属于代词使用错误。

× So I think I need to remember something about my study like what classes ever have in this day and what materials I need to bring with me.

✓ So I think I need to remember something about my studies like what classes I have on this day and what materials I need to bring with me.

“ever have in this day”表达不正确，应为“I have on this day”，介词和结构使用错误。

× As I often forget some important things, so I tried many methods.

✓ As I often forget some important things, I have tried many methods.

句子中“as”和“so”连用导致结构重复，应去掉“so”，并且时态应与现在完成时搭配。

× Firstly, I will take a note on the paper and it can remind me.

✓ Firstly, I will take a note on paper and it can remind me.

“on the paper”中“the”不必要，通常表达为“take a note on paper”。

× Secondly, I also make some calendars in my smart phones and I found it quite useful for me.

✓ Secondly, I also make some calendars on my smartphone and I find it quite useful for me.

“smart phones”应为单数“smartphone”，且“make some calendars”表达不自然，通常用“set reminders”更合适，但此处只纠正复数问题。