Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より明確で自然な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。例えば、具体的な例を挙げる際は、文を分けて説明すると良いでしょう。

예시: Yes, I am good at memorizing things. For example, when I was a university student, I often memorized many words for tests.

제안: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。否定の表現は簡潔にし、理由を明確に述べることが大切です。また、単語の繰り返しや不適切な語彙の使用を避けましょう。

예시: No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I usually take notes when I hear important information.

제안: 回答が非常に不明瞭で意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して具体的かつ明確に答え、文法や語彙の誤りを減らす必要があります。例えば、日常生活で覚えるべき具体的な事柄を挙げて説明しましょう。

예시: In daily life, I need to remember important things like my home address because it is useful in many situations.

제안: 回答が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由や方法を具体的に説明することが必要です。また、不要な言葉や曖昧な表現は避けましょう。

예시: When I need to remember important things, I usually write memos because it helps me not to forget them.

× I often memorized many wars.

✓ I often memorized many words.

The word 'wars' is a spelling mistake and should be 'words' to make sense in the context. The past tense 'memorized' is correctly used here.

× I often take take memos when I hear the understudy something important things.

✓ I often take memos when I hear or study something important.

The phrase 'take take' is a repetition error and should be 'take'. 'Understudy' is incorrect here; it should be 'hear or study'. The phrase 'something important things' is redundant; 'something important' is correct. The verb 'take' is in present tense, which fits the context of habitual action.

× I think UM people should need to remember in many things, but it is picture EI.

✓ I think people need to remember many things, but it is difficult.

The phrase 'UM' is a filler and should be removed. 'Should need to' is redundant; 'need to' suffices. 'Remember in many things' is incorrect; it should be 'remember many things'. 'It is picture EI' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'it is difficult' fits the context better.

× I think we should remember our mayor address be 'cause there are many chance to tear our men.

✓ I think we should remember our major address because there are many chances to use it.

'Mayor address' should be 'major address' or 'home address'. 'Be 'cause' should be 'because'. 'Chance' should be plural 'chances'. 'Tear our men' is incorrect; likely intended 'use it' or similar. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Up when I hurried and study about important things, I often take memos.

✓ When I hurry and study important things, I often take memos.

'Up when' is incorrect; 'When' suffices. 'Hurried' should be 'hurry' to match present tense with 'study'. 'Study about' is incorrect; 'study' alone is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.