Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then explaining with clear supporting details. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things unless they interest me. For example, if a topic is related to my hobbies, I remember it easily, but if it's unrelated, I tend to forget it quickly.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and provide specific details clearly. Also, correct verb tenses and plural forms.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, especially when I am stressed. For instance, when I came to collect my visa, I had all the documents with me, but because of stress, I forgot that I had them.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to organize your ideas better by starting with a clear topic sentence, then adding specific examples. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence flow using linking words.

예시: In daily life, I need to remember important things like passwords, keys, and documents. These items are essential because forgetting them can cause many problems.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and is a bit confusing. Try to clearly explain your method of remembering things with proper sentence structure and linking words to improve coherence.

예시: When I was young, I used to write down all my passwords on paper. Now that I'm older, I save them securely in the notes or password section on my phone.

× Not exactly but yes it's The thing is related to my interest then it will be more memorable and if it's off topic then I think I will forgot in less time.

✓ Not exactly, but yes. The thing is, if it is related to my interest, then it will be more memorable, and if it's off topic, then I think I will forget it in less time.

The sentence uses 'forgot' incorrectly in the present/future context; the correct form is 'forget' for present/future tense. Also, 'it's The thing' needs punctuation and capitalization correction. The sentence should maintain present tense consistency when talking about general truths or habits.

× Yes, sometimes in stressful moment I used to forgot some ways important documents or various information which is important to remember.

✓ Yes, sometimes in stressful moments I used to forget some important documents or various information which are important to remember.

The verb 'forgot' is the simple past tense, but after 'used to' the base form 'forget' should be used. Also, 'moment' should be plural 'moments' to match the context. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'documents or information'.

× For example when I was here to collect my visa and all the informations are with me itself.

✓ For example, when I was here to collect my visa, all the information was with me itself.

'Informations' is incorrect; 'information' is uncountable and singular. 'Are' should be 'was' to agree with singular 'information'. 'Itself' is unnecessary and awkward here.

× But at this at this stressful moment I forgot that all the documents are with me.

✓ But at that stressful moment, I forgot that all the documents were with me.

The phrase 'at this at this' is repetitive and should be 'at that'. The verb 'are' should be 'were' to maintain past tense consistency with 'forgot' and 'moment'.

× I think in our daily life we have to remember our passwords, keys and all other important documents which are. Present with us, I think it's important to remember these on as it gains an significance importance.

✓ I think in our daily life we have to remember our passwords, keys, and all other important documents which are present with us. I think it's important to remember these as they have significant importance.

The sentence has punctuation errors and awkward phrasing. 'Which are. Present' should be 'which are present'. 'On as it gains an significance importance' is incorrect; it should be 'as they have significant importance'. Also, 'significance importance' is redundant.

× Yes, when I was young I used to wrote all the passwords on both an now when I am grown up I used to keep it in my phone in the notes section or some somewhere in the password section.

✓ Yes, when I was young, I used to write all the passwords on paper, and now that I am grown up, I keep them in my phone in the notes section or somewhere in the password section.

After 'used to', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'wrote' should be 'write'. 'On both an' is unclear and likely a mistake; 'on paper' is a common phrase. 'Used to keep' is incorrect for current habit; 'keep' is appropriate. Also, pronouns should agree in number: 'it' should be 'them' referring to passwords.