Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免多余词汇，并注意语法和句子完整性。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things, so I usually use a calendar to keep track of important assignments and tasks.

제안: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达不清，句子断裂，内容不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达经历，并避免语法错误。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, last month I missed an appointment with some juniors who wanted to come to Canada and ask me for advice.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但有轻微语法错误和重复。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: As a full-time student and part-time worker, I need to remember my exact schedules for assignments, work shifts, and tests because these are very important.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，句子不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达对工具的喜好和使用方法。

예시: I rely on my Outlook calendar because I like its design. I put all important things like my shifts, assignments, and family birthdays on it to help me remember.

× Yes, there was a few times I've got something really important.

✓ Yes, there were a few times I've got something really important.

这里的主语是复数形式“a few times”，谓语动词应该用复数形式“were”，而不是单数形式“was”。

× Yes, there was a few times I've got something really important.

✓ Yes, there were a few times I got something really important.

句子中描述的是过去发生的事情，应该使用一般过去时“got”，而不是现在完成时“I've got”。

× Just last month I've got up an important.

✓ Just last month I got an important appointment.

“appointment”是单数名词，前面不需要“up”，且“got”用来表示过去发生的动作。

× Just last month I've got up an important. Appointment with my juniors who wants come to Canada and ask me for otherwise?

✓ Just last month I got an important appointment with my juniors who want to come to Canada and ask me for advice.

“juniors”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“want”。“ask me for otherwise”表达不清，推测应为“ask me for advice”。

× Just last month I've got up an important. Appointment with my juniors who wants come to Canada and ask me for otherwise?

✓ Just last month I got an important appointment with my juniors who want to come to Canada and ask me for advice.

“come to Canada”前应加不定式“to”，表示目的。

× These are things are really important.

✓ These things are really important.

句子中多余的“are”导致语法错误，应删除。

× I pray for your Outlook calendar.

✓ I prefer your Outlook calendar.

“pray”用法错误，应为“prefer”，表示偏好。

× I really like is design so I will put.

✓ I really like its design, so I will put.

“is”应为物主代词“its”，表示“它的设计”。

× All important things like my shift, my assignments, my families birthdays on calendars to help me remember the things.

✓ All important things like my shifts, my assignments, my family's birthdays on the calendar to help me remember things.

“shift”应为复数“shifts”，表示多个班次；“families birthdays”应为“family's birthdays”，表示家庭成员的生日；“calendars”应为单数“calendar”，前文提到的是单一的日历。