Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to form complete sentences and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, provide a clear example to support your statement. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember phone numbers and important theoretical processes I studied at school.

제안: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand. Focus on giving a direct response with specific details. Avoid incomplete sentences and try to explain the situation logically using linking words.

예시: Yes, I once forgot to wish my mother on her birthday, which was very important to me. I felt really bad because I usually remember such occasions.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks structure. Try to respond directly and use complete sentences. Provide specific examples of what you need to remember daily and use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember phone numbers and appointments. For instance, I often have to recall the dates when I have meetings or social gatherings.

제안: Your answer is somewhat clear but can be improved by using better vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Explain your methods in more detail and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I usually try to keep important things in my mind. However, if something is very important, I make a note on my phone to ensure I don't forget it.

× Yes, I'm pretty good at memorizing things like.

✓ Yes, I'm pretty good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'things like' is incomplete and unclear here. It should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× Uh, also when I was in. Memorize the theoretical process. Yes.

✓ Uh, also when I was in school, I memorized the theoretical process.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. Completing the sentence with 'school' and correcting the verb tense to past tense 'memorized' makes it grammatically correct and meaningful.

× Yeah, love your forgot, my mother posted.

✓ Yeah, I forgot, my mother posted.

The phrase 'love your forgot' is incorrect and unclear. It should be corrected to 'I forgot' to properly express the past action.

× It was really important that I forgot to wish.

✓ It was really important, but I forgot to wish.

The original sentence is confusing. Adding 'but' clarifies the contrast between importance and forgetting, improving sentence structure.

× Or in the morning. I was it.

✓ In the morning, I forgot to wish her.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining and completing them provides clarity and grammatical correctness.

× That was the one thing. Yeah, I mean.

✓ That was the one thing I forgot, yeah.

The original sentences are fragmented. Combining them into a single coherent sentence improves clarity and grammar.

× In my daily life, I would say. Do you still remember numbers, Phone numbers?

✓ In my daily life, I would say I still remember numbers, like phone numbers.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Combining them into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Then some days like whenever I have. Come fix the specific day to make someone so these are the things that I have to remember in my daily life.

✓ Then some days, like whenever I have to fix a specific day to meet someone. So these are the things that I have to remember in my daily life.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reconstructing it into complete sentences improves clarity and grammar.

× I do not use anything specific to remember important things.

✓ I do not use anything specific to remember important things.

This sentence is grammatically correct and uses modal verb 'do not' appropriately.

× I just keep them in mind or when they split is really important I just make a note in my screen.

✓ I just keep them in mind, or when they are really important, I just make a note on my screen.

The original sentence has errors like 'they split' which is unclear. Correcting it to 'they are' and adding commas improves clarity and grammar.