Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Avoid filler words like 'Oh' and ensure correct verb tenses and plural forms.

예시: No, I am not very good at memorising things. For example, when I was learning English, I often forgot important vocabulary and numbers, which made it difficult to improve.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Focus on giving a direct response with specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I sometimes forget to drink enough water, which is essential for staying healthy.

제안: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain with specific details what you need to remember daily. Avoid unrelated words or names.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember deadlines for my projects and assignments to complete them on time.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and avoid repetition.

예시: I usually use my phone to set reminders for important tasks. If I don't have my phone, I write notes on paper to help me remember what to do.

× No, actually I also forgot. An important things I finally had to remember numbers and vocabularies when I learn English. Oh.

✓ No, actually I also forgot. An important thing I finally had to remember was numbers and vocabulary when I learned English. Oh.

The phrase 'An important things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural but preceded by the singular article 'An'. It should be 'An important thing'. Also, 'vocabularies' is generally uncountable and should be 'vocabulary'. Additionally, 'when I learn English' should be in past tense 'when I learned English' to match the past context.

× No, actually I also forgot. An important things I finally had to remember numbers and vocabularies when I learn English. Oh.

✓ No, actually I also forgot. An important thing I finally had to remember was numbers and vocabulary when I learned English. Oh.

The verb 'learn' should be in past tense 'learned' to match the past context of the sentence.

× Yes, I focal turn any Bolton things I often forgot I forgot. An important thing and demanding your life like drinking water and stay hydrated.

✓ Yes, I often forget many important things. An important thing is taking care of your life, like drinking water and staying hydrated.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect pronouns and words ('focal turn any Bolton things'). It should be corrected to clear pronouns and proper expressions. Also, 'stay hydrated' should be 'staying hydrated' to maintain parallel structure.

× Yes, I focal turn any Bolton things I often forgot I forgot. An important thing and demanding your life like drinking water and stay hydrated.

✓ Yes, I often forget many important things. An important thing is taking care of your life, like drinking water and staying hydrated.

The phrase 'demanding your life' is incorrect; it should be 'taking care of your life' or similar. Also, 'stay hydrated' should be 'staying hydrated' to fit the sentence structure.

× I need to remember the lie that lines for my project or assignment. Anne.

✓ I need to remember the lines for my project or assignment. Anne.

The phrase 'the lie that lines' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'the lines' to refer to text lines. 'Lie' is incorrect here.

× I usually use. I usually use for my phone to set reminder and a lens for my important tags. Without my phone I use traditional methods like using a paper and write down on people to do links.

✓ I usually use my phone to set reminders and alarms for my important tasks. Without my phone, I use traditional methods like using paper and writing down to-do lists.

The original sentence has incomplete and incorrect sentence structure ('I usually use. I usually use for my phone'). Also, 'a lens for my important tags' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'alarms for my important tasks' is more appropriate. 'Write down on people to do links' is incorrect; it should be 'writing down to-do lists'.