Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi thiếu tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như câu "my memory is really. Episodic" không rõ ràng và bị ngắt quãng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh những câu bị ngắt quãng hoặc không hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích thêm về cách bạn ghi nhớ hoặc khó khăn bạn gặp phải.

예시: I'm not very good at memorising things because my memory tends to be quite episodic. For example, I only remember small parts of experiences rather than details, which makes it hard to recall specific information.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác, ví dụ như "I've been forgetting" nên là "I forgot" và câu "my friend. Didn't even talk to me" bị ngắt quãng không hợp lý. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho sự kiện đã xảy ra và nối các câu bằng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I once forgot my friend's birthday, which made me feel really upset. After that, my friend stopped talking to me, and we gradually became strangers.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngắt quãng và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác, ví dụ như "I not I'm not allowed" và "Listen. Another thing is my. Play sport routine". Bạn nên luyện tập nói câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh ngắt quãng và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và cụ thể hơn về các hoạt động bạn cần nhớ.

예시: The most important things I need to remember daily are my school schedule because I am not allowed to miss any classes. Also, I have to keep up with my sports routine since I want to stay fit and healthy.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu bị ngắt quãng, ví dụ như "and they note paper" và "these. Kind of notes or really easy easy". Bạn nên luyện tập nói câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích thêm về cách bạn sử dụng các ghi chú đó.

예시: I usually write important things on my smartphone notes or on paper because these kinds of notes are easy for me to see everywhere. This helps me remember tasks and appointments effectively.

× Well, I'm not really good at remembering things because my memory is really. Episodic, and I just remember a little bit of each experience that happened in my life.

✓ Well, I'm not really good at remembering things because my memory is really episodic, and I just remember a little bit of each experience that happened in my life.

The original sentence incorrectly splits 'really' and 'episodic' into two parts, causing a sentence fragment. The period after 'really' should be removed to connect the adjective 'episodic' properly to the sentence. This improves sentence flow and clarity.

× Well yes, I've been forgetting one of my friends birthday in the past and I was really upset.

✓ Well yes, I forgot one of my friend's birthdays in the past and I was really upset.

The phrase 'I've been forgetting' is incorrect here because the action is a specific past event, not a continuous or repeated action. The simple past tense 'I forgot' is appropriate. Also, 'friends birthday' should be possessive 'friend's birthday'.

× After that my friend. Didn't even talk to me and we soon become stranger.

✓ After that, my friend didn't even talk to me and we soon became strangers.

The sentence incorrectly splits 'friend' and 'didn't' with a period, which should be a comma or no break. 'Become' should be in past tense 'became' to match the past context. Also, 'stranger' should be plural 'strangers' because it refers to both people.

× What the most important things that I have to remember is my school routine because I not I'm not allowed to miss any day.

✓ The most important thing that I have to remember is my school routine because I'm not allowed to miss any day.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words 'What' and 'I not' causing confusion. 'Things' should be singular 'thing' to agree with 'is'. The phrase 'I not I'm not' is incorrect and should be corrected to 'I'm not'.

× Listen. Another thing is my. Play sport routine because I want to be fit so that I have to do it on a daily basis.

✓ Another thing is my sports routine because I want to be fit, so I have to do it on a daily basis.

The sentence is fragmented with unnecessary periods after 'Listen' and 'my'. 'Play sport routine' is awkward; 'sports routine' is more natural. The sentence should be combined for clarity and flow.

× I usually write the important things on my note on smart phone or and they note paper because these. Kind of notes or really easy easy for me to see every where.

✓ I usually write important things in my notes on my smartphone or on note paper because these kinds of notes are really easy for me to see everywhere.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'note' and 'smart phone'; it should be 'in my notes' and 'on my smartphone'. 'They note paper' is incorrect; it should be 'note paper'. 'Kind' should be plural 'kinds'. Also, 'every where' should be one word 'everywhere'.