Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免口语化的填充词，且注意时态和语法的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. Since I was young, I have practiced memorising various school assignments. For example, I had to recite texts containing over 1000 Chinese characters, which helped improve my memory skills.

제안: 回答内容较具体，但表达不够连贯，语法和句子结构有误。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意时态和句子完整性。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, last semester I missed the deadline for a final exam in an online course. As a result, I had to email the teacher to ask for a chance to make up the exam.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，句子结构混乱。建议理清思路，使用简洁明了的句子，并避免重复表达。

예시: Currently, I need to remember the assignments and schedules for each course because I am preparing for the ISO exam. Keeping track of deadlines helps me manage my time effectively.

제안: 回答较为自然，但有口语填充词和表达不够准确的问题。建议减少口语化表达，使用更正式和准确的词汇。

예시: I usually use technology to help me remember important things. For example, I use the calendar app on my phone to note down important dates such as birthdays and exams. I also set reminders to receive notifications in time.

× Well, yes, I think I am, 'cause since a very young age I was really trying to memorize things up, being different kinds of school assignments.

✓ Well, yes, I think I am, 'cause since a very young age I have really been trying to memorize things, including different kinds of school assignments.

这里“being different kinds of school assignments”用法不正确，应该用现在完成进行时态表达从过去到现在一直在做的动作，并且“being”用法不当，改为“including”更合适。

× For example, we were asked to, you know, recited some texts with the over 1000 Chinese characters.

✓ For example, we were asked to, you know, recite some texts with over 1000 Chinese characters.

“were asked to”后面应接动词原形，不能用过去式“recited”，应改为“recite”。

× We also need to memorize some.

✓ We also need to memorize some of them.

句子不完整，“some”后面缺少宾语，应该补充“of them”使句子完整。

× Like last semester I accidentally forgot about the deadline of a final exam for an online course, so when I think of that it was the gate was already closed so I had to write a e-mail to ask for the teacher to give me an A.

✓ Like last semester I accidentally forgot about the deadline of a final exam for an online course, so when I thought of that the gate was already closed, so I had to write an e-mail to ask the teacher to give me an A.

“when I think of that”时态不对，应该用过去时“thought”；“the gate was already closed”中“was”重复，应删去一个；“write a e-mail”中“a”应改为“an”。

× Well for now like recently I am preparing for Isos exam so I do need to remember and I'm taking some courses so I do need to remember what assignments are, what the assignments are for each class and also the timeline, the schedules for the causes.

✓ Well, for now, like recently, I am preparing for the ISO exam, so I do need to remember, and I'm taking some courses, so I do need to remember what the assignments are, what the assignments are for each class, and also the timeline, the schedules for the courses.

“Isos exam”应为“the ISO exam”；“the causes”应为“the courses”；句子中缺少逗号，影响理解。

× Well, mostly I use some technology to help me remember these things. For example, I always use the calendar app in my cell phone to, you know, know down some important dates like some most birthdays or some exams.

✓ Well, mostly I use some technology to help me remember these things. For example, I always use the calendar app on my cell phone to, you know, note down some important dates like most birthdays or some exams.

“in my cell phone”应改为“on my cell phone”；“know down”应为“note down”；“some most birthdays”表达不正确，应为“most birthdays”。

× I also set reminders to, you know, receive notification.

✓ I also set reminders to, you know, receive notifications.

“notification”应为复数形式“notifications”，因为提醒通常是多个通知。