Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“apostasy”用词不当，且句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达，避免重复和错误。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember my family members' birthdays and special occasions of my friends.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不连贯。建议使用正确的时态和连词，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday because I was very busy studying, and I felt really ashamed about it.

제안: 回答中词汇使用不当且句子结构混乱，建议使用准确的词汇并组织清晰的句子。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks like where I parked my car, taking care of my dog at home, and attending important meetings.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但有拼写错误（tackles应为tasks），建议注意拼写和用词准确性。

예시: I usually make a schedule on my phone because it helps me stay organized and remember important tasks.

× Yes I'm I'm memorising things.

✓ Yes, I am good at memorising things.

这里学生回答时使用了进行时态“I'm memorising”，但问题是询问能力，应该用一般现在时表达习惯或能力，且句子中重复了“I'm”，需要删除多余部分。建议用“I am good at memorising things.”更符合语境。

× I can easily remember my family members apostasy and the.

✓ I can easily remember my family members' names and special occasions from my friends.

原句中“apostasy and the”无意义，可能是发音或拼写错误，应改为“family members' names and special occasions”，且“family members”后应加所有格“'s”表示所属关系。

× I have not gotten my best friends birthdays once becauses.

✓ I have forgotten my best friends' birthdays once because

“have not gotten”用法不当，表达忘记应使用“have forgotten”，且“becauses”拼写错误，应为“because”。“best friends birthdays”应加所有格“friends' birthdays”。

× I was so busy with study.

✓ I was so busy with studying.

“busy with study”中“study”应使用动名词形式“studying”，表示忙于学习。

× I need to remember my day life taskers through carefully such as the parking lot dog at home in the attending important meetings.

✓ I need to remember my daily tasks carefully, such as parking the dog at home and attending important meetings.

“day life taskers”应改为“daily tasks”，“through carefully”用法错误，应直接用“carefully”。“parking lot dog”表达不清，应为“parking the dog”或“taking care of the dog”。“in the attending”结构错误，应改为“and attending”。

× I usually make a schedule on my phone because it helps me stay organized and the remember important tackles.

✓ I usually make a schedule on my phone because it helps me stay organized and remember important tasks.

“the remember”中“the”多余，应删除。“tackles”拼写错误，应为“tasks”。