Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and explaining how meditation helps your memory with clear linking words.

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I practise meditation daily. This helps me improve my concentration and remember information more easily.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Use simple sentences and correct grammar to clearly describe the situation. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, recently I forgot my mobile phone in my hotel while I was out. Since then, I have become very careful and always check my belongings before leaving any place.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or incorrect words. Focus on specific important items you remember daily and explain why. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure.

예시: Every day, I need to remember my mobile phone, wallet, and keys because these items are essential for me to go out and feel comfortable.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure to explain how technology helps you remember important things, and use linking words for coherence.

예시: I use technology to remember important things. For example, I set reminders on my phone, so if I forget something, the alert helps me recall it easily.

× Definitely, I have very good memory and I easily remember all of my things because I usually do meditation on daily basis which helps me to make more. Constant consistency in my work.

✓ Definitely, I have a very good memory and I easily remember all of my things because I usually meditate on a daily basis which helps me to maintain constant consistency in my work.

The phrase 'very good memory' needs an article 'a' before 'very good memory' as 'memory' is a singular countable noun. 'Do meditation' is incorrect; the verb 'meditate' should be used instead. 'On daily basis' requires the article 'a' to become 'on a daily basis'. The sentence 'which helps me to make more. Constant consistency in my work.' is fragmented and unclear; it is corrected to 'which helps me to maintain constant consistency in my work' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, recently I was stood watching law and I forward about.

✓ Yes, recently I was standing watching law and I thought about it.

The phrase 'was stood' is incorrect; the past continuous form 'was standing' is appropriate. 'I forward about' is incorrect; the correct past tense verb is 'thought about'. Also, 'law' is unclear here but kept as is since context is limited.

× About my mobile phone in my hotel and after that I'm very careful and always I checked my all of the belongings to me when whenever I went outside from my town.

✓ I left my mobile phone in my hotel and after that, I have been very careful and always check all of my belongings whenever I go outside my town.

The phrase 'About my mobile phone in my hotel' is incomplete and unclear; corrected to 'I left my mobile phone in my hotel'. 'I'm very careful and always I checked' mixes tenses and word order; corrected to 'I have been very careful and always check' to maintain present perfect and simple present tense. 'My all of the belongings to me' is incorrect; corrected to 'all of my belongings'. 'When whenever I went outside from my town' is redundant and incorrect; corrected to 'whenever I go outside my town'.

× On daily basis I often remember my wild phone, wallet and some other belongings of me such as my perfume, airports, my words and many other things because with these kind of stuff I feel very happy.

✓ On a daily basis, I often remember my mobile phone, wallet, and some other belongings such as my perfume, passports, my words, and many other things because with these kinds of stuff I feel very happy.

'Wild phone' is likely a typo for 'mobile phone'. 'Belongings of me' is incorrect; corrected to 'belongings'. 'Airports' is likely a typo for 'passports'. 'These kind of stuff' should be 'these kinds of stuff' to agree in number.

× With the help of technological error, we can easily remember things.

✓ With the help of technology, we can easily remember things.

'Technological error' is incorrect in this context; the intended phrase is 'technology'.

× I also lie on that technology and I always put a reminder in my phone own special things, because whenever I forgot about that, particular things are easily remembered by my reminder.

✓ I also rely on that technology and I always put reminders in my phone for special things, because whenever I forget about them, those particular things are easily remembered by my reminder.

'Lie on that technology' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'rely on that technology'. 'Put a reminder in my phone own special things' is incorrect; corrected to 'put reminders in my phone for special things'. 'Whenever I forgot about that' should be 'whenever I forget about them' to maintain tense and pronoun agreement. 'Particular things are easily remembered by my reminder' is corrected to 'those particular things are easily remembered by my reminder' for clarity.