Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use more natural phrasing and correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise. For example, say "I'm not good at memorizing things, so I usually use reminders on my phone to help me remember tasks."

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things, so I rely on my phone's reminders to keep track of my tasks.

제안: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "I try not to forget important things, especially exams and assignments, because I always set reminders."

예시: I usually don't forget important things like exams or assignments because I set reminders to help me stay organized.

제안: Make your answer more coherent and specific. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "In my daily life, I need to remember all my work tasks and study assignments because I am working and studying at the same time."

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember both my job tasks and my study assignments since I am balancing work and school.

제안: Improve grammar and clarity. Use linking words to explain your method. For example, "Although I'm not good at memorizing, I remember important things like exam dates because I feel stressed about them."

예시: Although I struggle with memorizing, I remember important dates like exams because the stress helps me focus on them.

× I'm not good at memorizing thing that's why I usually use a reminder in my phone and my phone helped me to remind whatever task I have to do.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things, that's why I usually use a reminder on my phone and my phone helps me to remember whatever tasks I have to do.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items to memorize. Also, 'reminder in my phone' should be 'reminder on my phone' due to correct preposition use (preposition error corrected separately). 'Helped' should be 'helps' to agree with present tense and third person singular subject 'my phone'. 'Remind' should be 'remember' to correctly express the intended meaning.

× I'm not good at memorizing thing that's why I usually use a reminder in my phone and my phone helped me to remind whatever task I have to do.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things, that's why I usually use a reminder on my phone and my phone helps me to remember whatever tasks I have to do.

The correct preposition to use with 'reminder' and 'phone' is 'on' not 'in'. We say 'a reminder on my phone' because the reminder is a feature or app on the device.

× my phone helped me to remind whatever task I have to do.

✓ my phone helps me to remember whatever tasks I have to do.

The verb 'helped' is past tense but the context is present habitual action, so it should be 'helps'. Also, 'remind' is incorrect here; 'remember' is the correct verb to express recalling tasks.

× my phone helped me to remind whatever task I have to do.

✓ my phone helps me to remember whatever tasks I have to do.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple assignments or duties.

× I'm never forget something that is important and crucial to me.

✓ I never forget something that is important and crucial to me.

The phrase 'I'm never forget' is incorrect because 'I'm' (I am) should not be combined with 'forget' in this way. The correct present tense form is 'I never forget'.

× For me my exam an my study are very important and I never forget any assignment in my college as well so.

✓ For me, my exams and my studies are very important and I never forget any assignments in my college as well.

'Exam' and 'study' should be plural 'exams' and 'studies' to refer to multiple instances. Also, 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the context.

× For me my exam an my study are very important and I never forget any assignment in my college as well so.

✓ For me, my exams and my studies are very important, and I never forget any assignments in my college as well.

The sentence lacks proper punctuation and conjunction placement. Adding commas and 'and' improves clarity and sentence flow.

× I always set allow.

✓ I always set an alarm.

The phrase 'set allow' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'set an alarm' to indicate using a reminder or alert.

× In my daily life, I have to recognize. All my work.

✓ In my daily life, I have to recognize all my work.

The sentence is incorrectly split into two fragments. Combining them into one complete sentence improves clarity.

× I have to turn on my task whatever assigned to me on my job and during this time also how to complete my assignments because I am studying as well.

✓ I have to complete whatever tasks are assigned to me at my job, and during this time, also complete my assignments because I am studying as well.

The phrase 'turn on my task' is incorrect; 'complete' is the appropriate verb. 'On my job' should be 'at my job' to use the correct preposition. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I'm not at memorizing things, but I can't remember the any. Very crucial thing for me.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things, but I can remember any very crucial thing for me.

The phrase 'I'm not at memorizing things' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm not good at memorizing things'. 'The any' is incorrect; it should be 'any'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I'm not at memorizing things, but I can't remember the any. Very crucial thing for me.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things, but I can remember any very crucial thing for me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting the phrase and combining the ideas into one sentence improves understanding.

× For example, if my exam is coming, I can remember the date because I'm very stressed for my exam.

✓ For example, if my exam is coming, I can remember the date because I'm very stressed about my exam.

The preposition 'for' after 'stressed' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'about'.