Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences complete and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say, "I'm not very good at memorizing things. However, during my studies, I used techniques like making notes and repeating materials to remember important information."

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things. However, during my studies, I used techniques like making notes and repeating materials to remember important information effectively.

제안: Your answer has repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, check your grammar and pronunciation. For example, "Yes, I have. Recently, I forgot about an important meeting. Fortunately, a colleague reminded me, and I realized my mistake."

예시: Yes, I have. Recently, I forgot about an important meeting. Fortunately, a colleague called me and reminded me, so I was able to attend on time.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific. For example, "I need to remember many things daily. For instance, I have to take medicine for my eyes to maintain my health. Also, I try to eat five meals a day to keep my energy levels up."

예시: I need to remember many things daily. For example, I have to take medicine for my eyes to maintain my health. Also, I try to eat five meals a day to keep my energy levels up.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to use linking words and clearer sentence structure. For example, "Since I'm not good at remembering things, I make a To-Do list on my phone to keep track of tasks I need to complete each day."

예시: Since I'm not good at remembering things, I make a To-Do list on my phone to keep track of tasks I need to complete each day.

× I'm not very good at memorizing things in.

✓ I'm not very good at memorizing things.

The preposition 'in' at the end of the sentence is unnecessary and incorrect here. The phrase 'good at memorizing things' is complete without 'in'. Removing 'in' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× So even though my memories in not.

✓ So even though my memory is not good.

The word 'memories' is plural and does not fit well here; 'memory' (singular) is more appropriate. Also, 'in not' is incorrect; it should be 'is not'. The sentence needs a proper verb and adjective to be complete and clear.

× Recently I had a very important meeting meeting and I totally forgot about it about the day.

✓ Recently I had a very important meeting and I totally forgot about it that day.

The word 'meeting' is repeated unnecessarily. Also, 'about the day' is incorrect; it should be 'that day' to indicate the specific day. Removing repetition and correcting the phrase improves clarity and grammar.

× And suddenly one of my colleague called me and told that you have a meeting to the right.

✓ And suddenly one of my colleagues called me and told me that I have a meeting right away.

'Colleague' should be plural 'colleagues' when referring to one among many. The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here; it should be 'I' because the speaker is talking about themselves. 'To the right' is incorrect; 'right away' is the correct phrase to indicate immediacy.

× And then I realize yes, and now I am very.

✓ And then I realized it, and now I am very worried.

The verb 'realize' should be in past tense 'realized' to match the past event. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'it' and completing the thought with 'worried' makes it grammatically correct and meaningful.

× For instance, I have to make medicine.

✓ For instance, I have to take medicine.

The verb 'make' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'take' when referring to consuming medicine. This correction aligns with standard English usage.

× Also I tried to prepare my eat 5 meals a day, keep my energy levels up also.

✓ Also, I try to eat 5 meals a day to keep my energy levels up.

The past tense 'tried' is inconsistent with the habitual action described. 'Try' in present tense is appropriate. The phrase 'prepare my eat' is incorrect; it should be 'eat'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× As I told that I'm not very good at remembering things, so I make list in my phone that that is To Do List what I need to complete in the whole day.

✓ As I said, I'm not very good at remembering things, so I make a list on my phone called a To-Do List of what I need to complete during the day.

'As I told' is incorrect; 'As I said' is the correct phrase. 'Make list' needs an article 'a list'. The preposition 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone'. The phrase is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I write it down on my notes in my phone and it will help.

✓ I write it down in my notes on my phone, and it helps me.

The phrase 'on my notes in my phone' is awkward; 'in my notes on my phone' is correct. Also, 'it will help' is better as 'it helps me' to indicate habitual action. The sentence is corrected for preposition use and tense consistency.