Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Apni answer e clear structure maintain korun. Prothome direct question er uttor din, tarpor kichu supporting details add korun. Apnar answer e sentence gulo incomplete ar kichu part bujhte oshubidha hoy. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo complete korte ebong linking words use korte, jemon 'however', 'but', 'because' etc. Ete answer ta natural ar logical hobe.

예시: Yes, I used to be very good at memorising things a few years ago. However, now I find it a bit difficult because I often forget small details. For example, I sometimes forget where I put my keys. But I try to improve by practicing regularly.

제안: Apnar uttor e grammar ar sentence structure improve korte hobe. 'Have not ever forgetting' er jaygay 'have never forgotten' bola uchit. Apni supporting details e kichu specific example dite paren. Linking words use korle answer ta aro fluent hobe.

예시: To be honest, I have never forgotten anything very important. For instance, if I have an important event tomorrow, I remember it all day long and make sure I am prepared. This helps me avoid forgetting important things.

제안: Apnar answer e kichu incomplete sentence ache, jar karone meaning clear hocche na. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo complete korte ebong specific details add korte. Linking words use korle answer ta aro bhalo hobe. Vocabulary o aro bistarito korte paren.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to stay organized and manage my time effectively. Since I am both a private teacher and a student, I have many tasks to handle. For example, I have to prepare lessons, attend classes, and complete assignments within deadlines.

제안: Apnar uttor e sentence gulo incomplete ar kichu part bujhte oshubidha hoy. Apni chesta korun clear ar complete sentence banate. Apni kichu specific method mention korte paren jemon note neya, reminder use kora etc. Linking words use korle answer ta aro natural hobe.

예시: To be honest, I don't use any special methods to remember important things because I am quite lazy. However, sometimes I write notes or set reminders on my phone to help me remember important tasks.

× If you asked me this question like 2-3 years ago then I. Then my answer will be a big yes then Now I am not good at memorizing things like I just.

✓ If you had asked me this question 2-3 years ago, my answer would have been a big yes. Now, I am not good at memorizing things.

The original sentence has incomplete and fragmented structure, mixing past and present tenses incorrectly. Using the third conditional 'If you had asked' correctly refers to a past hypothetical situation. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I just. Forgetting things like 4.

✓ I just forget things easily.

The phrase 'I just forgetting' is incorrect because 'forgetting' is a present participle and cannot be used as the main verb without an auxiliary. The correct form is 'I just forget'. The number '4' seems out of context and is removed for clarity.

× I have not ever forgetting something very important because if something is important like tomorrow is a big day for me, then I just remembered it like.

✓ I have never forgotten anything very important because if something is important, like tomorrow is a big day for me, then I just remember it.

The phrase 'have not ever forgetting' is incorrect; the present perfect requires the past participle 'forgotten'. Also, 'just remembered' should be 'just remember' to indicate habitual action. The sentence is corrected for proper verb forms and tense consistency.

× In daily life, I think it is important to remember to stay, organize and manage time effectively.

✓ In daily life, I think it is important to remember to stay organized and manage time effectively.

The phrase 'remember to stay, organize' is awkward and unclear. 'Stay organized' is the correct expression. The preposition 'to' is correctly used before verbs, but the list needed correction for clarity and meaning.

× In my daily life I have to remember a lot of things because I am bored, a private teacher and a student.

✓ In my daily life, I have to remember a lot of things because I am a boarder, a private teacher, and a student.

The word 'bored' is incorrect here; likely the intended word is 'boarder' (someone who lives away from home). Also, commas are added for clarity in the list. The sentence structure is improved for meaning and grammar.

× So in like in three days I need to.

✓ So, in about three days, I need to remember many things.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'remember many things' completes the thought and clarifies the meaning. The phrase 'in like in' is redundant and corrected to 'in about' for natural speech.

× I don't do anything special because I am very. I'm a very lazy person and I really don't like to do any kind of lay store notes because I found this very like.

✓ I don't do anything special because I am very lazy. I'm a very lazy person and I really don't like to take any kind of notes because I find this very boring.

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect words like 'lay store notes' which should be 'take notes'. The pronoun usage is corrected by completing the sentence and replacing incorrect phrases for clarity.

× I found this very like. Not my 40s. And I get in remembering this like.

✓ I find this very boring. It's not my style, and I have difficulty remembering things this way.

The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases like 'not my 40s'. It is corrected to express the intended meaning using proper adjectives and sentence structure.