Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Избегайте лишних пауз и повторов, а также старайтесь использовать связующие слова для плавности речи. Например, можно начать с общего утверждения, затем привести причину и завершить выводом.

예시: I used to have an excellent memory before I had a child. However, after giving birth, I noticed that my memory has worsened significantly. This change is quite common among new parents due to increased responsibilities and stress.

제안: Ответ следует сделать более связным и точным, избегая повторов и грамматических ошибок. Используйте связующие слова, чтобы логично связать идеи, и уточните детали для большей конкретики.

예시: I don't usually forget important things, but I often forget small tasks. For instance, recently I had to reschedule my pottery class, but I forgot about the new lesson dates and missed some sessions.

제안: Ответ должен быть более чётким и связным. Избегайте разрывов в предложениях и используйте связующие слова для плавного перехода между идеями. Также старайтесь давать более конкретные примеры.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to reschedule lessons when my students cancel. Additionally, I must prepare lesson plans, although sometimes I forget to finish them due to lack of time.

제안: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и точность выражений. Используйте более подходящие слова и фразы, чтобы сделать речь более естественной и понятной.

예시: I usually make a list of important tasks, and when I complete something, I tick it off and erase it. This way, I can easily keep track of what I've done and what still needs to be finished.

× To be honest, after giving a birth to a child, oh I really have a bad memory.

✓ To be honest, after giving birth to a child, oh I really have a bad memory.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'birth'. The phrase should be 'giving birth' without an article because 'birth' is an uncountable noun in this context.

× But before it I had a really cool memory.

✓ But before that, I had a really good memory.

The phrase 'before it' is incorrect; 'before that' is the correct expression to refer to a previous time. Also, 'cool memory' is informal; 'good memory' is more appropriate here.

× What I see, what I hear, what I. Learn and I could never forget about it, but now.

✓ What I see, what I hear, what I learn, and I could never forget it, but now I do.

The sentence is fragmented and has punctuation errors. The period after 'I' is incorrect. Also, 'forget about it' should be 'forget it' for better grammar. The sentence needs to be completed properly.

× I wouldn't say I always forget about the important things, but pretty small things I always forget.

✓ I wouldn't say I always forget important things, but I always forget pretty small things.

The modal verb 'wouldn't' is used correctly, but the sentence structure is awkward. Also, 'forget about' is less formal; 'forget' is better here. The sentence is rearranged for clarity.

× For example, recently I had the to reschedule my pottery class and I forgot that I had a lesson those days.

✓ For example, recently I had to reschedule my pottery class and I forgot that I had a lesson those days.

The article 'the' before 'to reschedule' is incorrect and should be removed. The phrase should be 'had to reschedule' indicating obligation.

× And I forgot and I missed them.

✓ And I forgot and missed them.

The sentence is acceptable, but 'them' refers to plural lessons, which is correct. No change needed here.

× When my students cancelled the lessons, I should remember about the rescheduling them.

✓ When my students cancel the lessons, I should remember to reschedule them.

'Should remember about the rescheduling them' is incorrect. The correct form is 'should remember to reschedule them'. Also, 'cancelled' is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'cancel' is better.

× And of course, about writing the lesson plans.

✓ And of course, to write the lesson plans.

The preposition 'about' is incorrect here. The correct preposition is 'to' when referring to the action of writing.

× Sometimes I really don't have time and. I end up with forgetting to finish my lesson plans sometimes.

✓ Sometimes I really don't have time and I end up forgetting to finish my lesson plans.

The period after 'and' is incorrect and breaks the sentence. Also, 'end up with forgetting' should be 'end up forgetting' for correct verb usage.

× I always make a list of important things, and if I did something from this list, I usually ticket and I erase it.

✓ I always make a list of important things, and if I do something from this list, I usually tick it and erase it.

'Did' should be 'do' to match present tense. 'Ticket' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'tick' meaning to mark. Also, 'erase it' is acceptable.

× And I always remember what I have to do, what I didn't finish yet, and all my tasks are in front of my face.

✓ And I always remember what I have to do, what I haven't finished yet, and all my tasks are in front of me.

'Didn't finish yet' should be 'haven't finished yet' for present perfect tense. 'In front of my face' is awkward; 'in front of me' is the correct expression.