Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Следует избегать ошибок и излишней простоты, а также расширить ответ, добавив детали.

예시: Yes, I consider myself good at memorising things. For example, I vividly remember my trip to Russia, which was an unforgettable experience.

제안: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Следует использовать связующие слова и конкретные примеры.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, sometimes I forget to go to school or to clean my clothes, which causes problems.

제안: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и логичным. Следует использовать связующие слова и более точные формулировки.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks such as eating, drinking water, going to school, and spending time with my family.

제안: Ответ должен быть более связным и содержательным. Следует объяснить методы запоминания и использовать связующие слова.

예시: I remember important things by making mental notes and setting reminders. For example, I always remind myself to go to school and work on time, and to get enough sleep at night.

× My favorite memory is I flying in Russia.

✓ My favorite memory is flying in Russia.

The verb 'flying' should be used as a gerund here, not preceded by the pronoun 'I'. The phrase 'I flying' is incorrect; instead, use 'flying' alone as the subject complement after 'is'.

× Oh yes, I forget something important things.

✓ Oh yes, I forget important things.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to match the past context indicated by 'Oh yes'. Also, 'something important things' is redundant; 'important things' suffices.

× Aye. I I forget. Go to school, I forget. Clean my T-shirt.

✓ Yes. I forgot. Go to school, I forgot. Clean my T-shirt.

The verb 'forget' should be in the past tense 'forgot' to correctly indicate past actions. Repetition of 'I' is unnecessary and should be corrected.

× I forget something important things.

✓ I forget some important things.

The phrase 'something important things' is incorrect because 'something' is singular and 'things' is plural. Use 'some important things' to correctly express plural objects.

× I don't need to remember, eat, drink water, uh, go to school and. Talk with my family.

✓ I don't need to remember to eat, drink water, go to school, and talk with my family.

The verb 'remember' should be followed by the infinitive 'to eat' etc. Also, the sentence structure needs correction to properly connect the activities with 'and' and remove unnecessary pauses.

× Yes, I remember important things I remember. Go to school, I remember. Go to work, I remember. Sleeping night.

✓ Yes, I remember important things. I remember to go to school, I remember to go to work, and I remember to sleep at night.

The sentence needs proper punctuation and the verb 'remember' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to go' or 'to sleep'. 'Sleeping night' is incorrect; it should be 'sleep at night'.