Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议回答时先给出明确的主题句，然后用具体细节支持，避免断断续续的句子。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I pay close attention in class and review my notes regularly. For example, I can remember most of the important points my teacher explains during lessons.

제안: 回答时句子不完整且断断续续，影响表达效果。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: To be honest, I have never forgotten anything important because I always write down important things in my phone and check them regularly.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使内容更丰富和连贯。

예시: As a college student, I need to remember my class timetable and daily schedule. Moreover, I also have to memorise some key data and formulas related to my professional courses.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和句子不完整的问题。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词连接观点，使表达更自然。

예시: To remember important things, I always write them down in my cell phone and check them frequently throughout the day.

× That my teacher taught me at claws, except for some.

✓ That my teacher taught me in class, except for some very detailed points.

原句中'That my teacher taught me at claws'结构不完整且单词错误，应为'in class'表示'在课堂上'，且句子缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构错误。建议补充完整句子并更正单词。

× To be honest, I have never forgotten something important because.

✓ To be honest, I have never forgotten something important because I have a habit.

句子以because结尾，缺少原因部分，导致句子结构不完整。应补充完整原因，使句子完整。

× I have a habit. That I will always. Write down every. Important thing in my cell phone.

✓ I have a habit that I will always write down every important thing in my cell phone.

原句断句不当，导致句子不连贯且结构混乱。应合并为一句完整句子，保持语义连贯。

× Two remember important things.

✓ To remember important things,

原句中'Two'应为不定式'to'，且句子不完整，应作为状语引导后续内容。