Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng thì đúng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'forgot' nên là 'forget'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget where I put my keys or my phone, especially when I enter my classroom. This sometimes makes me worried about my memory.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách sắp xếp câu cho hợp lý. Từ 'elesius' không đúng chính tả, nên dùng 'anxious' hoặc 'worried'. Hãy chia câu thành các phần rõ ràng và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten some important things before. For example, this morning I left my phone in my classroom, which made me feel very anxious because I didn't know where it was.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp như 'daddy life', 'assemble', 'schools sketcher'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember many important things, such as my school schedule and appointments. These help me stay organized and manage my time well.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng chính xác. Ví dụ, 'not important things' nên là 'note important things'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn với liên từ phù hợp.

예시: I prefer to note important things on my phone because I can check them anytime and anywhere, which helps me make sure I don't forget anything I need to do.

× I usually forgot where I put my keys or phone, especially when I go in my class.

✓ I usually forget where I put my keys or phone, especially when I go into my class.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'forget' should be used. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'into' to indicate movement into a place.

× especially when I go in my class.

✓ especially when I go into my class.

The correct preposition to indicate movement towards a place is 'into' rather than 'in'.

× I have forgotten some important things before for assemble my this morning I left my phone in my class, which made me feel very elesius because I didn't know where it was.

✓ I have forgotten some important things before; for example, this morning I left my phone in my class, which made me feel very anxious because I didn't know where it was.

The phrase 'for assemble' is incorrect and should be 'for example'. The word 'elesius' is a misspelling of 'anxious'. Also, the sentence needs proper punctuation to separate ideas.

× I left my phone in my class

✓ I left my phone in my classroom

The word 'class' refers to a group of students or a course, while 'classroom' refers to the physical room. 'In my classroom' is more appropriate here.

× I have a range of thing need to remember for assemble.

✓ I have a range of things I need to remember; for example,

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' after 'a range of'. Also, 'for assemble' should be 'for example'.

× I need to remember the schools sketcher are important even in my life.

✓ I need to remember that the school's schedule is important even in my life.

The phrase 'schools sketcher' is incorrect; it should be 'school's schedule'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'school's schedule' to specify it.

× I prefer to not important things in my phone because I can open it every time and everywhere to take promise that I don't forgot anything I need to do.

✓ I prefer to note important things in my phone because I can open it anytime and anywhere to make sure that I don't forget anything I need to do.

The phrase 'prefer to not important things' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to note important things'. 'Every time and everywhere' should be 'anytime and anywhere'. 'Take promise' is incorrect; 'make sure' is appropriate. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to match present tense.