Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within five sentences.

예시: I find it quite difficult to memorise things because I tend to forget easily. However, I try to improve my memory by practising regularly and using techniques like repetition and association.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear, which makes it ineffective. Always provide a complete sentence that directly answers the question, and if possible, add specific details or examples to enrich your response.

예시: Yes, I have often forgotten important things, such as appointments or deadlines, which sometimes causes problems for me.

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific details. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary relevant to the context and avoid fragmented sentences.

예시: One important thing I need to remember every day is to take my phone with me because it helps me stay organised by keeping track of my schedule and reminding me of important tasks.

제안: Your answer is somewhat understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence followed by supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: To remember important things, I usually take notes in a notebook or set reminders on my phone, which I find very effective for staying organised.

× It is very difficult to me to memorize things because I am the folks I have a forgets in mind.

✓ It is very difficult for me to memorize things because I am the kind of person who forgets things.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'difficult'; it should be 'for'. Also, 'the folks I have a forgets in mind' is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It should be 'the kind of person who forgets things' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× It is very difficult to me to memorize things because I am the folks I have a forgets in mind.

✓ It is very difficult for me to memorize things because I am the kind of person who forgets things.

The word 'forgets' is a verb and should not be used as a noun. The plural noun 'folks' is incorrectly used to refer to a singular person. The sentence needs to use 'person' (singular) and 'forgets things' as a verb phrase.

× But I think I can try my best to improve my my. Improve my brain to remind every things.

✓ But I think I can try my best to improve myself and my brain to remember everything.

The sentence is fragmented and contains repetition ('my my'). 'Improve my brain to remind every things' is incorrect; 'remember everything' is the correct phrase. The sentence needs to be combined properly for clarity.

× Yeah, I'm always. **** for garden.

✓ Yeah, I'm always forgetting things.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'I'm always' needs a verb to complete the thought. 'For garden' is unclear and likely a transcription error. The corrected sentence expresses the intended meaning clearly.

× I think one thing I need to remember in my daily life is my phone because it is a way. Notice me, help you have the ways.

✓ I think one thing I need to remember in my daily life is my phone because it helps me stay notified and organised.

The pronouns 'Notice me, help you have the ways' are incorrect and unclear. The sentence should use 'helps me' to indicate the phone's function. The phrase is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Now for me to do some things and it's keep tracks of my schedules and make me stay organizers.

✓ It helps me do things, keep track of my schedules, and stay organised.

'Keep tracks' should be 'keep track' (singular). 'Make me stay organizers' is incorrect; it should be 'stay organised'. Prepositions and verb forms are corrected for proper usage.

× I think, uh, one thing that making can make me remember important thing is why I'm taking notes in a notebook or setting reminders of a for something important I think is very effective for to somebody like me.

✓ I think one thing that helps me remember important things is taking notes in a notebook or setting reminders for something important. I think this is very effective for someone like me.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary words ('making', 'why', 'of a for'). The sentence is restructured for clarity, correct verb usage, and proper prepositions.