Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，比如“memories things”应为“memorising things”，句子结构不够清晰。建议你直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并避免冗余。可以先给出一个主题句，然后用一两句具体细节支持。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often need to repeat information several times before I can remember it. I think this is because my memory has weakened as I've gotten older.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“Sure, Nasta mouse”不明白意思，句子不完整。建议你直接回答问题，说明具体情况，并用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: Yes, I once forgot my mom's birthday because I was very busy with work and study. Even though I had made a note in my notebook, I still forgot to call her.

제안: 你的回答不连贯且有语法错误，表达不清楚。建议你先明确回答问题，然后用具体细节支持，使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my study and work tasks. For example, I write down my homework and appointments with clients to keep track of everything.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“you food there isn't something”不合适。建议你直接说明你如何记住重要的事情，使用连贯的句子和具体细节。

예시: When I need to remember important things, I usually write them down in my notebook or on my phone. I also set alarms to remind me of important dates or tasks.

× I think memories things is becoming very difficult for me.

✓ I think memorising things is becoming very difficult for me.

The phrase 'memories things' is incorrect because 'memories' is a plural noun and 'things' is also plural, but the intended meaning is about the action of memorising, which is a verb form. The correct word is 'memorising' (verb), not 'memories' (noun).

× Maybe it's because I have been 37 years old, my memory has become much weaker than before.

✓ Maybe it's because I am 37 years old; my memory has become much weaker than before.

The phrase 'I have been 37 years old' is incorrect because age is expressed in the present simple tense using 'am' rather than present perfect 'have been'. The correct form is 'I am 37 years old'.

× So which we did.

✓ So that's what we did.

The sentence 'So which we did.' is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a proper subject and verb structure. The corrected sentence 'So that's what we did.' provides a clear subject and verb, making the sentence complete and meaningful.

× Sure, Nasta mouse, I forgot to my mom's birthday.

✓ Sure, last month, I forgot my mom's birthday.

The phrase 'Nasta mouse' is a mispronunciation or incorrect use of words. It should be 'last month'. Also, 'forgot to my mom's birthday' is incorrect; the verb 'forgot' should be followed directly by the object 'my mom's birthday' without 'to'.

× During that time I was very busy with my work and study even though I.

✓ During that time, I was very busy with my work and study.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'even though I.' which is incomplete and incorrect. Removing 'even though I.' completes the sentence properly.

× Make a note in my notebook, but I still remember I didn't remember this.

✓ I made a note in my notebook, but I still didn't remember this.

The original sentence lacks a subject in the first clause and uses incorrect tense. 'Make a note' should be 'I made a note' to indicate past action. Also, 'I still remember I didn't remember this' is contradictory and incorrect; it should be 'I still didn't remember this.'

× May imaginary knife I have to remember order for my study and work tasks.

✓ Maybe I have to remember the order for my study and work tasks.

The phrase 'May imaginary knife' is incorrect and nonsensical. It should be 'Maybe'. Also, 'remember order' needs the definite article 'the' before 'order'.

× Every day because all of the things are really important for me I have to write my homework and to later is my clients if I've.

✓ Every day, because all of the things are really important to me, I have to write my homework and later contact my clients if I have time.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'to later is my clients if I've' is incorrect and incomplete. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun and verb usage.

× You food there isn't something that is very important for me.

✓ If there is something that is very important for me,

The original sentence 'You food there isn't something that is very important for me.' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence provides a proper conditional structure.

× I would tend to write them down on my notebook or. On my computer or telephone and then I would just add our alarm clock for this thing, for this date.

✓ I would tend to write them down in my notebook or on my computer or telephone, and then I would just set an alarm for this thing, for this date.

The phrase 'add our alarm clock' is incorrect; it should be 'set an alarm'. Also, 'on my notebook' should be 'in my notebook'. The sentence is corrected for proper preposition and pronoun use.