Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构较为混乱，存在语法错误和重复表达，影响了语言的自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免使用口语填充词如“like”，并注意时态和主谓一致。

예시: I think I am generally good at memorizing things. However, as I have grown older, my memory has become less sharp compared to when I was a child. For example, I could easily memorize poems in primary school, but now it takes me longer to do so.

제안: 回答中信息表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“dial”可能是“deadline”的误用。建议使用准确词汇，理清事件顺序，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I once forgot the deadline for submitting my university coursework because I was busy preparing for my final exams. I was very worried, but I contacted my teacher and was allowed to resubmit it.

제안: 回答内容不够具体且表达混乱，存在词汇错误（如“clauses”应为“classes”，“shelves exact”不明确）。建议明确表达学习和生活中需要记住的具体事项，避免模糊和错误词汇。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my class schedule, including the number of classes and their locations. Besides that, I also make sure to call my family and friends regularly to keep in touch.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“recounted remember”不正确。建议使用正确表达方式，清晰说明记忆方法，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: I understand that human memory is limited, so I usually write down important tasks in a to-do list. Sometimes, I also mark important dates on my calendar to help me remember them.

× when I was in primary school is very easy for me to like reset the poems

✓ when I was in primary school it was very easy for me to memorize the poems

句子中缺少主语，且动词时态不正确。应加上主语"it"，并使用过去时态"was"，同时"reset"用词不当，应改为"memorize"。

× my memory becomes worse than when I was a child

✓ my memory became worse than when I was a child

描述过去的情况时，动词时态应使用过去时，"becomes"应改为过去式"became"。

× there was a dial and for my coursework in the university

✓ there was a deadline for my coursework at the university

"dial"应为"deadline"，且"in the university"应改为"at the university"，表示地点。

× I contact the teacher

✓ I contacted the teacher

动词时态应为过去时，且"contact"后不需要介词。

× I contact the teacher and finally I managed to resubmit it

✓ I contacted the teacher and finally I managed to resubmit it

描述过去事件时，动词"contact"应使用过去式"contacted"。

× like how many clauses and where to attend these classes

✓ like how many classes and where to attend these classes

"clauses"应为"classes"，表示课程。

× go to shelves exact

✓ go to shelves, etc.

"shelves exact"应为"shelves, etc."，表示等。

× I recounted remember everything just in your room

✓ I cannot remember everything just in my room

"recounted"用法错误，应为"cannot"，且人称代词应统一，"your"改为"my"。

× read them down to make a list of the days since that I need to do

✓ write them down to make a list of the things that I need to do

"read them down"应为"write them down"，"days since"应为"things that"。

× have a calendar to for the important thing in my life

✓ have a calendar for the important things in my life

"to for"重复，应去掉"to"，"thing"应为复数"things"。