Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'Yes, I am good at memorizing, especially academic material, because I use various techniques that help me study effectively.'

예시: Yes, I am good at memorizing, especially academic material, because I use various techniques that help me study effectively.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases and redundancy. Try to be more specific and use linking words. For example, say 'No, I rarely forget important things because I make notes on my phone, which helps me remember upcoming tasks.'

예시: No, I rarely forget important things because I make notes on my phone, which helps me remember upcoming tasks.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your thoughts and use clear sentences. For example, say 'I need to remember important dates like birthdays and also study-related information such as engineering codes and assignments.'

예시: I need to remember important dates like birthdays and also study-related information such as engineering codes and assignments.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some unclear parts and grammatical errors. Use linking words and clearer sentences. For example, say 'I make notes and flashcards, and I regularly review them to ensure I don't forget important tasks or disappoint others.'

예시: I make notes and flashcards, and I regularly review them to ensure I don't forget important tasks or disappoint others.

× I'm really good at memorizing a lots of things but apart from that I focus mainly at memorizing the academics part that helps me with my study I do.

✓ I'm really good at memorizing a lot of things but apart from that I focus mainly on memorizing the academic part that helps me with my studies.

The phrase 'a lots of things' is incorrect; 'lots' should be singular as 'a lot of things'. Also, 'focus mainly at' should be 'focus mainly on'. 'Academics' as a noun is plural, but here 'academic part' is more appropriate. 'Study I do' is awkward; 'my studies' is correct.

× I focus mainly at memorizing the academics part that helps me with my study I do.

✓ I focus mainly on memorizing the academic part that helps me with my studies.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect after 'focus'; the correct preposition is 'on'.

× I do make various notes if I have imputing things coming up and as per my preference, I really like to make notes in my phone so that I can really look at what is coming next day.

✓ I do make various notes if I have important things coming up and as per my preference, I really like to make notes on my phone so that I can really look at what is coming the next day.

'Imputing' is incorrect; likely meant 'important'. Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone'. 'Next day' needs the article 'the' to be 'the next day'.

× I really like to make notes in my phone so that I can really look at what is coming next day.

✓ I really like to make notes on my phone so that I can really look at what is coming the next day.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a phone for notes; 'on my phone' is correct.

× Well there are lots of things I need to remember, including my family, birthdays, my friends and my relatives too. But other than that as I am a student an I'ma come to engineering students so I do have to remember a lots of codes an lots of things I need to do because the.

✓ Well, there are lots of things I need to remember, including my family, birthdays, my friends, and my relatives too. But other than that, as I am a student and I'm going to become an engineering student, I do have to remember a lot of codes and lots of things I need to do because of that.

The phrase 'a lots of codes an lots of things' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of codes and lots of things'. 'I'ma come to engineering students' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm going to become an engineering student'. Also, 'because the' is incomplete and corrected to 'because of that'.

× But other than that as I am a student an I'ma come to engineering students so I do have to remember a lots of codes an lots of things I need to do because the.

✓ But other than that, as I am a student and I'm going to become an engineering student, I do have to remember a lot of codes and lots of things I need to do because of that.

The conjunction 'an' is incorrect; it should be 'and'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed proper conjunctions and punctuation for clarity.

× I. Me the flash cards and I try to write everything in my notebook as well an whenever something ahead is coming up, I do check it regularly so that I don't miss anything and I don't disappoint people around me.

✓ I make flash cards and I try to write everything in my notebook as well, and whenever something ahead is coming up, I do check it regularly so that I don't miss anything and I don't disappoint people around me.

'I. Me the flash cards' is incorrect; it should be 'I make the flash cards'. Also, 'an' should be 'and'. Proper sentence structure and conjunctions are necessary for clarity.