Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, you can say, "Yes, I am good at memorising things, especially names of people, whether they are strangers or family members."

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things, especially names of people, whether they are strangers or family members. This helps me in social situations and building relationships.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "Yes, I forgot to make important notes last week, which caused some inconvenience."

예시: Yes, I forgot to make important notes last week, which caused some inconvenience because I missed some key information for my work.

제안: Your answer is a bit confusing and repetitive. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain your methods with linking words. For example, "In my daily life, I need to remember my tasks, so I usually make a To-Do list and write notes on my phone, which helps me a lot."

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my tasks, so I usually make a To-Do list and write notes on my phone, which helps me a lot to stay organised.

제안: Your answer repeats previous points and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear and concise answer with linking words. For example, "As I mentioned earlier, I use techniques like making To-Do lists and notes on my phone to remember important tasks on time."

예시: As I mentioned earlier, I use techniques like making To-Do lists and notes on my phone to remember important tasks on time, which helps me manage my responsibilities effectively.

× To be honest, I am good at memorizing things because I usually memorize things and the name of the person, whether he or she is a strange one or home even.

✓ To be honest, I am good at memorizing things because I usually memorize things and the name of the person, whether he or she is a stranger or even at home.

The word 'strange' is an adjective, but here a noun 'stranger' is needed to refer to a person who is unknown. Using 'stranger' correctly fits the sentence context.

× Well, I remember last week I forgotten to make notes because the which was very important for me too.

✓ Well, I remember last week I forgot to make notes because it was very important for me too.

The verb 'forgotten' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to be correct. Since the sentence is in simple past tense, 'forgot' should be used instead of 'forgotten'. Also, 'the which' is incorrect; 'it' is the correct pronoun here.

× So this kind of information I have forgotten last week which is very important and accessory to me.

✓ So this kind of information, which is very important and necessary to me, I forgot last week.

The sentence structure is awkward and unclear. 'Accessory' is incorrect; 'necessary' is the correct adjective. Rearranging the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× There are some sort of tips to remember in my daily life and that is the things which I usually do to remember things in my daily life or in my routine work and that is I usually make To Do List and usually write the nodes on my cell phone.

✓ There are some tips to remember in my daily life, and these are the things I usually do to remember things in my daily life or routine work: I usually make a To Do List and write notes on my cell phone.

'Some sort of tips' is incorrect; 'some tips' is appropriate. 'Nodes' is a wrong word; 'notes' is correct. The sentence is also long and confusing; breaking it into clearer parts improves understanding.

× So it was only think of which helped me a lot to remember.

✓ So it was the only thing that helped me a lot to remember.

'Think' is incorrect; 'thing' is the correct noun. Also, 'only thing' requires the definite article 'the'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Will as I earlier said that there are some sort of techniques which are used to remember things which are very necessary and which plays a crucial role in my life.

✓ Well, as I said earlier, there are some techniques used to remember things which are very necessary and which play a crucial role in my life.

'Will' is incorrect here; 'Well' is the correct interjection. 'Some sort of techniques' should be 'some techniques'. 'Plays' should be 'play' to agree with plural 'techniques'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× And I usually make To Do List to do that particular task on time and they usually make a notes on my cell phone.

✓ And I usually make a To Do List to do that particular task on time, and I usually make notes on my cell phone.

'Make a notes' is incorrect; 'make notes' is correct as 'notes' is plural and does not need 'a'. Also, 'they' is incorrect pronoun here; it should be 'I' to refer to the speaker.