Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

예시: I'm not very confident in my memory, but when I need to remember something important, I try to understand it fully and review it several times.

제안: 回答中断断续续，语句不连贯，且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，清晰描述事件，并避免语法错误。

예시: Yes, I have. Last year, when I was traveling by train, I realized I had forgotten to bring my charger, so I had to buy a new one at a shop.

제안: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“cat's balls”应为“cat's bowls”，“clog in”应为“log in”。建议注意词汇准确性，并使用正确的时态和表达。

예시: Every day when I wake up, I need to fill my cat's bowls with clean water, and after I arrive at my company, I need to log in to my computer.

제안: 回答简短且有语法错误，如“Set”不应大写，且句子连接不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子并适当扩展内容。

예시: When I need to remember important things, I set alarms on my phone to remind me, so I don't forget.

× To say that I'm good at memory things, but if I have to remember some certain things, I would try to comprehend them and review them again and again.

✓ To say that I'm good at memorising things, but if I have to remember certain things, I would try to comprehend them and review them again and again.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作；'some certain things'中'some'和'certain'重复，去掉'some'更合适。

× Last year when I was on my way to a. Train, travel. I found that I forgot to take my charger with me and I had to go to, the shop to buy one.

✓ Last year when I was on my way to travel by train, I found that I had forgotten to take my charger with me and I had to go to the shop to buy one.

句子中'train, travel'表达不清，应改为'travel by train'；'I forgot'应使用过去完成时'had forgotten'，因为忘记动作发生在过去某一时间之前。

× Every day I woke up, I need to fill my cat's balls with clean water and after I arrived at my company, I need to clog in.

✓ Every day when I wake up, I need to fill my cat's bowls with clean water and after I arrive at my company, I need to log in.

描述日常习惯应使用一般现在时，'woke up'和'arrived'应改为'wake up'和'arrive'；'cat's balls'应为'cat's bowls'（猫的水碗）；'clog in'拼写错误，应为'log in'。

× When I have to remember important things, I'll, Set alarms for them. In case I forgot.

✓ When I have to remember important things, I'll set alarms for them in case I forget.

'Set'不应大写；'In case I forgot'时态不对，应为现在时'in case I forget'，表示将来可能发生的情况。