Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较大问题，建议练习简单句型，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

예시: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I find it boring. For example, I struggle to remember long lists or detailed information.

제안: 回答表达不够准确，时态和语法错误较多。建议使用正确的时态，并补充具体例子说明如何提醒自己。

예시: I don't think I have forgotten anything important because I always remind myself by setting alarms or making notes.

제안: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊。建议明确回答问题，使用连词连接句子，并具体说明需要记住的事项。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to stay positive and complete my tasks on time. For example, I make a to-do list every morning.

제안: 回答基本清楚，但表达不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并说明具体使用的提醒方法。

예시: I usually write important things on my phone and set reminders so that I don't forget them.

× I'm not good at her memory since especially those. Is boring I'm the ways we treat structure.

✓ I'm not good at memorising things, especially those. The ways we treat structure are boring.

原句语序混乱，句子结构不完整，导致意思不清晰。应调整语序，使句子完整且符合英语表达习惯。

× I guess not, because if something is very important I will reminding myself of it.

✓ I guess not, because if something is very important I will remind myself of it.

情态动词后应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式。这里应使用动词原形'remind'。

× I need to remember myself in a positive attitude. And get some work done. OK, so I'm working on.

✓ I need to keep a positive attitude and get some work done. OK, so I'm working on it.

'remember myself in a positive attitude'表达不当，'myself'用错，且句子不完整。应改为表达保持积极态度，并补充完整句子。

× I will write it down in my most of my phone. So that it will remind me in the right time.

✓ I will write it down on my phone so that it will remind me at the right time.

'in my most of my phone'表达错误，'most of my phone'不合逻辑，应改为'on my phone'。介词使用错误，时间表达应为'at the right time'。