Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达不够流畅，语法和词汇使用有误，且句子结构不完整。建议练习使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并避免重复和语法错误。

예시: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things because I need a long time to focus on them. Therefore, memorising is quite difficult for me.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，语句混乱，无法理解具体意思。建议在回答时先理清思路，使用简单明了的句子描述具体事件。

예시: Last year, I forgot to attend an important meeting because I confused the date. It was a big mistake, and I learned to check my schedule carefully.

제안: 回答不完整且重复，缺乏具体细节。建议明确列举日常需要记忆的具体事项，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my school schedule and the knowledge I learn every day to keep up with my studies.

제안: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，且句子结构混乱。建议使用简单句子清楚说明记忆方法，并举例说明。

예시: To remember important things, I usually use some applications. For example, 'Pink' is a Chinese app that helps me keep track of important tasks, and it works well for me.

× Actually I'm not very good at memories.

✓ Actually I'm not very good at memorising things.

这里'memories'是复数名词，但句子中需要使用动名词'memorising'来表达记忆的能力，避免名词复数错误。

× Somethings.

✓ Something.

'Somethings'是错误的复数形式，正确的用法是不可数名词'something'，表示某事。

× B 'cause.

✓ Because.

'B 'cause'是口语缩写，书面语应写为完整的'Because'。

× All I need to long time to focus on it.

✓ I need a long time to focus on it.

句子结构错误，'need'后应接名词短语，'a long time'是正确表达，'to long time'错误。

× Yeah, so memory is something is very hard to me.

✓ Yeah, so memory is something very hard for me.

句子中多余的'is'应去掉，'hard to me'应改为'hard for me'，但这里主要是复数和单数的搭配问题。

× Last year I need her in Gross.

✓ Last year I needed her in Gross.

描述过去的事情，动词应使用过去式'needed'。

× but I forgot to town.

✓ but I forgot to go to town.

'forgot to town'缺少动词'go'，正确表达是'forgot to go to town'。

× Yeah, I confuse it.

✓ Yeah, I was confused about it.

描述过去的状态，动词应使用过去式或过去分词，'confuse'应改为'was confused'。

× So I ignore.

✓ So I ignored it.

描述过去的动作，动词应使用过去式'ignored'。

× So I ignore it. Ignore schools in your e-mail.

✓ So I ignored it. I ignored the school's email.

句子不完整且代词使用不当，应补充主语并明确指代。

× In my daily life I need to memorize more things on like a like a like go to school and learn daily knowledge is.

✓ In my daily life, I need to memorize more things, like going to school and learning daily knowledge.

句子结构混乱，'things on like a like a like'错误，需改为'like going to school and learning daily knowledge'。

× All what I need a remote remember important phase.

✓ All I need is to remember important phrases.

句子结构错误，'remote'用错，'phase'应为'phrases'，且句子应为'All I need is to remember important phrases'。

× I always use some applications yeah like like pink is a Chinese application that hold help me remember it and when this when these things work.

✓ I always use some applications, like Pink, a Chinese application that helps me remember things when they work.

句子结构混乱，'hold help me'错误，应为'helps me'，代词使用不当，需调整句子使其通顺。