Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to give a clear and complete answer with proper sentence structure. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and be more specific about your memorising habits.

예시: No, I am not very good at memorising things. For example, during school exams, I had to put extra effort into memorising key points and keywords to do well.

제안: Make your answer more coherent by using complete sentences and linking words. Be specific about what you forgot and how it affected others. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear expressions.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I recently forgot Mother's Day and did not prepare a surprise or gift for my mother, which made her feel a bit sad.

제안: Use complete sentences and correct grammar. Provide clear and specific examples of what you need to remember daily. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember my work tasks and workflow. Also, I have to remember where I parked my car so that I can find it easily later.

제안: Improve sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Be specific about the technology and apps you use to remember important things.

예시: Nowadays, technology provides great tools to help us remember important things. I use my phone's apps, such as the to-do list and calendar, to stay organised and remember everything.

× No, I wouldn't consider I am a good memorizer like.

✓ No, I wouldn't consider myself a good memorizer.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and missing reflexive pronoun. 'Consider' requires an object, so 'myself' is needed. Also, 'like' is misplaced and unnecessary here.

× In school exam and need to put extra effort to memorizing key points and keywords.

✓ In school exams, I need to put extra effort into memorizing key points and keywords.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb at the start, making it incomplete. Also, 'put effort to memorizing' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'into' followed by the gerund form 'memorizing'.

× Phone.

✓ (This sentence is unclear and incomplete; it should be removed or clarified.)

The word 'Phone.' alone is not a complete sentence and does not convey meaning in this context.

× Getting the monks in exam.

✓ Getting nervous during exams.

The original sentence is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. 'Monks' should be 'nervous', and the sentence needs proper structure.

× Like recently Mother's Day had just passed and I forgot Mother's Day.

✓ Like recently, Mother's Day had just passed and I forgot about it.

The phrase 'forgot Mother's Day' is incomplete; 'forgot about it' is more natural. Also, adding a comma after 'Like recently' improves clarity.

× In. I forgot to prepare. Some surprise or gift for my mother and she looks a bit sad, but less.

✓ I forgot to prepare some surprise or gift for my mother, and she looked a bit sad, but less so.

The original has fragmented sentences and tense inconsistency. 'She looks' should be past tense 'she looked' to match the past event. Also, 'but less' is unclear; 'but less so' clarifies the meaning.

× I need to remember my working task, my workflow an even.

✓ I need to remember my work tasks, my workflow, and even more.

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. 'An even' is unclear and likely a typo; 'and even more' fits better.

× I need to remember where I parked my car so that afterwards I can smoothly fine my car.

✓ I need to remember where I parked my car so that afterwards I can smoothly find my car.

'Fine' is a typo and should be 'find'. The sentence structure is otherwise correct.

× No, the day technology is great tools to help us to remember important things.

✓ Nowadays, technology is a great tool to help us remember important things.

'No, the day technology' is incorrect; 'Nowadays' is the correct adverb. 'Tools' should be singular 'tool' to match 'technology'. Also, 'help us to remember' can be simplified to 'help us remember'.

× I use my phones to remember important things through the apps, like to do this or Calendar.

✓ I use my phone to remember important things through apps, like to-do lists or Calendar.

'Phones' should be singular 'phone' unless multiple phones are used. 'The apps' should be 'apps' without 'the'. 'To do this' is unclear; 'to-do lists' is more appropriate.

× To help me stay organized and help me to remember. Everything.

✓ They help me stay organized and remember everything.

The original has sentence fragments. Combining into one sentence improves clarity and correctness.