Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在较多错误，建议练习用完整句子表达观点，并避免重复。可以先给出明确的主题句，然后用具体例子支持。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I often remember interesting places I visited during my childhood, which helps me recall happy memories.

제안: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，建议先明确回答问题，然后用具体例子说明，注意句子完整和逻辑连贯。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, sometimes I leave home without my keys, and then I have to go back to get them.

제안: 回答内容较为零散，建议用完整句子表达，并使用连接词使内容更连贯，同时提供更具体的细节。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as the weather forecast and whether I have any important homework to complete. Therefore, I always check my schedule carefully.

제안: 表达不清晰，语法和用词错误较多，建议先明确表达方法，再用具体细节支持，注意句子完整和逻辑性。

예시: I usually rely on my memory to remember important things. If something is very important, I write it down on paper to make sure I don't forget it.

× Yeah, I'm good at memory things things.

✓ Yeah, I'm good at memorizing things.

这里'memory things things'中的'memory'用法错误，应使用动名词'memorizing'表示记忆的动作，且重复了'things'。应改为'memorizing things'。

× Well, I was sleeping.

✓ Well, I was sleeping.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× Oh, I. Was free.

✓ Oh, I was free.

句子中断句不当，'I.'和'Was'应连成一句，形成完整句子。

× I am always memory some things like in my child and also very interesting place.

✓ I always remember some things from my childhood and also very interesting places.

'memory'用法错误，应为动词'remember'；'child'应为'childhood'表示童年；'place'应为复数'places'。

× Yes, I will. Forgot something important?

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important.

此处应使用现在完成时表达过去发生的事情，'will forgot'用法错误。

× I know it's not a good habit, but. It is jointly happened.

✓ I know it's not a good habit, but it has happened occasionally.

'jointly happened'用法错误，应表达'偶尔发生'，且句子断句不当。

× For example, where I go out, I will. Sing Do I bring my key?

✓ For example, when I go out, I sometimes ask myself, 'Did I bring my key?'

句子结构混乱，'Sing Do I bring my key?'无意义，应改为疑问句表达自问。

× Yes, and I need to go back to.

✓ Yes, and I need to go back to get it.

句子不完整，缺少动作的宾语。

× I think there are many things to remember in my daily life, for example, what the weather today.

✓ I think there are many things to remember in my daily life, for example, what the weather is today.

缺少动词'is'，导致句子不完整。

× And the. Do I have an important class homework today I need to do?

✓ And whether I have important class homework to do today.

句子断句错误，表达不清，应改为完整的陈述句。

× I can't got this so I need to check it every time to make sure I have.

✓ I can't remember this, so I need to check it every time to make sure I have it.

'can't got'用法错误，应为'can't remember'；句尾缺少宾语。

× I always depend on my man.

✓ I always depend on my memory.

'my man'用词错误，应为'my memory'表示记忆力。

× Yes, I will remind it in my mind and.

✓ Yes, I will remind myself in my mind.

'remind it'用法错误，应为'remind myself'；句子不完整。

× Every time I will always. Remind myself to two days.

✓ Every time I always remind myself two days in advance.

句子结构混乱，表达提前提醒的意思。

× If it is very, very important, I will. Write it on paper and it will. Tell me how to do.

✓ If it is very, very important, I will write it on paper and it will remind me what to do.

句子断句错误，表达不完整，应连贯表达写下来以提醒自己。