Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“think that yes”和“so I think that”，可以更简洁自然。同时，句子结构稍显简单，建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I regularly practice, especially by learning new words. However, when I am very tired or haven't slept well, I tend to forget things more easily.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“forget”应为“forgot”，“there is an examinations”应为“there was an examination”，“has ascended to me”表达不清。建议注意时态和词汇准确性，并使用连接词使叙述更连贯。

예시: Yes, I once forgot my identification card on the day of an examination. Fortunately, I still had some time, and my father was able to bring it to me, for which I was very grateful.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“my husband always complaining”应为“my husband always complains”，且句子较长且缺少连接词。建议使用更准确的语法和适当的连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like turning off the gas after cooking. However, I often forget this, and my husband always complains because it can lead to serious consequences.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“by several ways”应为“in several ways”，“write them down the list”应为“write them down on a list”，“my another option”应为“another option of mine”。建议注意介词和冠词的使用，提升表达准确性。

예시: I remember important things in several ways. For example, I write them down on a list and place it in front of my desk. Additionally, I record reminders on my cell phone, which notifies me at the right time, making it very convenient.

× Well, I think that yes because I keep learning especially remembering new words.

✓ Well, I think yes because I keep learning, especially remembering new words.

句中“that yes”结构不自然，应该去掉“that”使句子更通顺。

× However, sometimes if I feel really tired or lack of sleep, I will easily forget something.

✓ However, sometimes if I feel really tired or lack sleep, I will easily forget something.

“lack of sleep”中“lack”作为动词时不需要“of”，应直接用“lack sleep”。

× Yes, I remember that one day I forget my identification card, uh, when there is an examinations.

✓ Yes, I remember that one day I forgot my identification card, uh, when there was an examination.

描述过去事件时，动词应使用过去式，“forget”应改为“forgot”；“there is”应改为“there was”；“examinations”应为单数“examination”，因为前面用的是“an”。

× Luckily I still have some time and my father has ascended to me, so I was so thankful for his help.

✓ Luckily I still had some time and my father came to me, so I was so thankful for his help.

“has ascended to me”用法错误，应改为“came to me”表示“父亲来帮我”；同时时态应与上下文一致，改为过去时“had”。

× However, this is the thing that I always forget and my husband always complaining about that and he said that it will bring some really serious consequences.

✓ However, this is the thing that I always forget, and my husband is always complaining about that, and he said that it will bring some really serious consequences.

“my husband always complaining”缺少助动词，应为“my husband is always complaining”；句中逗号缺失，需分隔句子。

× Well, I always remember things by several ways.

✓ Well, I always remember things in several ways.

“by several ways”搭配不当，正确表达应为“in several ways”。

× For example, I will write them down the list and put it in front of my desk.

✓ For example, I will write them down on the list and put it in front of my desk.

“write down the list”缺少介词，应为“write them down on the list”。

× Except for that, recording it on my cell phone is also my another option and it will always remind me what to do in a certain period of time, which is so convenient.

✓ Besides that, recording it on my cell phone is also another option, and it will always remind me what to do at a certain time, which is very convenient.

“Except for that”用法不当，应改为“Besides that”；“my another option”中“my”多余，应去掉；“in a certain period of time”表达不自然，改为“at a certain time”；“so convenient”改为“very convenient”更合适。