Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，导致内容难以理解。建议你在回答时注意语法准确，避免使用不相关或错误的词汇，并且保持句子简洁明了。

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because my major requires me to remember many articles and important facts. Through my studies, I have developed strong memorization skills.

제안: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不连贯，影响理解。建议你练习使用正确的时态和词汇，确保句子结构完整，同时用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I studied the material before a test, but when I saw the test paper, my mind went completely blank. It was a terrible feeling because it affected my academic performance.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“pick up my memories”表达不准确。建议你使用更准确的词汇，并且注意句子结构，使表达更自然。

예시: I don't need to remember simple things like meals, but I have to remember important tasks such as picking up my friends or attending important conferences.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议你简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇和时态，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I usually make a to-do list on my phone so that I can keep track of important tasks. This helps me remember what I need to do and when to do it.

× Yes, I would say I'm at experts in memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I would say I'm an expert in memorizing things.

这里'experts'是复数形式，但主语是单数'I'，应使用单数形式'expert'。同时，'at experts'应改为'an expert'，因为表达的是身份。

× Clothes are made during loss and all my major is very demanding.

✓ Clothes are made during class and all my major is very demanding.

原句中的'during loss'应为'during class'，可能是拼写错误。'during'后面应接时间段或事件，'loss'不合适。

× all my major is very demanding.

✓ all my majors are very demanding.

'major'指专业，通常复数形式'majors'表示多个专业，且主语'all my majors'为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'。

× In memorizing, I have to memorize plenty of articles and presidents.

✓ In memorizing, I have to memorize plenty of articles and presentations.

'presidents'（总统）与语境不符，应该是'presentations'（演讲稿），且复数形式正确。

× I remember adjuster memorize the material today before the test, but I bought my minds totally went blank when I sought test paper.

✓ I remember just memorizing the material today before the test, but I thought my mind totally went blank when I saw the test paper.

'adjuster'应为'just'，'memorize'应改为动名词'memorizing'，'bought'应为'thought'，'minds'应为单数'mind'，'sought'应为'saw'。这些都是时态和词形错误。

× And I will say it's a quite terrible feeling 'cause it's related to academic performances and make me very suggest.

✓ And I will say it's quite a terrible feeling because it's related to academic performance and makes me very upset.

'a quite terrible'应为'quite a terrible'，'cause'应为'because'，'performances'应为不可数名词'performance'，'make'应为第三人称单数'makes'，'suggest'应为'upset'。

× Let me say I don't have to remember some simple things like breakfast or lunch, but I do have to remember some important task like today I have to pick up my memories or I have to attend important conference.

✓ Let me say I don't have to remember some simple things like breakfast or lunch, but I do have to remember some important tasks like today I have to pick up my mom or I have to attend an important conference.

'task'应为复数'tasks'，'memories'应为'mom'（妈妈），'important conference'前应加不定冠词'an'。

× And I will do A to do list on my phone so that I will track it when I need it when necessary.

✓ And I will make a to-do list on my phone so that I can track it when I need to, when necessary.

'do A to do list'应为'make a to-do list'，'will track'改为'can track'更合适，'when I need it'应为'when I need to'。

× So it can clearly tell me when to do an watch do.

✓ So it can clearly tell me when to do and what to do.

'an watch do'是错误表达，应为'and what to do'，表示“做什么”。