Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and then provide specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct and meaningful.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember important phone numbers like my own and my friends'. Moreover, I always recall specific details about people I know, such as their living arrangements, which helps me stay connected with them.

제안: Your answer needs to be more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then explain with specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, last year I forgot my best friend's birthday, which was very upsetting for me because it was the first time I had ever forgotten such an important date. Since then, I have been more careful to remember special occasions.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples using linking words. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas effectively.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember several important things. For example, I have to take care of my baby, remember where I parked my car, and keep track of my restaurant orders. To help me, I set alarms on my phone so that I don't forget these tasks.

제안: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to answer directly, then explain your methods with specific details and linking words. Use simple, correct sentences to make your answer natural and effective.

예시: I remember important things by writing them down on paper or in a calendar. Additionally, I use my phone to set alarms and reminders because I find digital reminders more reliable than paper notes. This helps me stay organised and not forget important tasks.

× Oh yes, I consider my surprise with Herman I I have a I'm riser for my number and my home phone numbers.

✓ Oh yes, I consider myself good at memorising numbers like my own and my home phone numbers.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunctions and unclear phrasing. 'I consider my surprise with Herman I I have a I'm riser' is not grammatically correct. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses proper conjunctions and sentence structure.

× Also in my friend.

✓ Also, I remember many things about my friends.

The phrase 'in my friend' is incorrect. It should be plural 'friends' and the preposition 'in' is not appropriate here. The correction uses 'about my friends' to express the intended meaning.

× I remember so many things.

✓ I remember many things.

The phrase 'so many things' is acceptable but 'many things' is more formal and fits better in this context. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I remember living space of the person with disability has always been set.

✓ I remember that the living space of a person with a disability is always arranged.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'that' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes Sir, anytime I forgot something, but the last year I think I forgot my my best friend birthday and I will wait for these things because it's very it's a first time I forgot to these things and it's a very hard thing for me.

✓ Yes Sir, I sometimes forget things, but last year I think I forgot my best friend's birthday and I felt bad because it was the first time I forgot such a thing and it was very hard for me.

The original sentence has tense inconsistency and incorrect verb forms. 'Anytime I forgot' should be 'I sometimes forget' for habitual action. 'I will wait for these things' is incorrect; it should express feeling bad. Also, 'my my best friend birthday' should be 'my best friend's birthday' showing possession.

× Tell my baby later I want which is important to remember the my car and then I did order my restaurant.

✓ I want to tell my baby later. It is important to remember my car and the order I made at the restaurant.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has unclear phrasing. 'Tell my baby later' is incomplete and unclear. The correction separates ideas and uses correct pronouns and verb forms.

× I want to make something so I will go and I will send this message if I forgot I put my alarm in my campaign 2 year too so remind me.

✓ I want to make something, so I will go and send this message. If I forget, I have set an alarm in my phone to remind me.

The original sentence mixes tenses and has unclear phrases like 'put my alarm in my campaign 2 year too'. The correction uses future tense appropriately and clarifies the meaning.

× Are you doing number important things by writing them down liner paper and calendar?

✓ Do you remember important things by writing them down on lined paper and a calendar?

The original sentence uses incorrect prepositions and word forms. 'Are you doing number important things' is incorrect; it should be 'Do you remember important things'. 'liner paper' should be 'lined paper'. Prepositions 'on' are necessary before 'lined paper' and 'calendar'.

× So I will reminder for improperly.

✓ So I will set reminders properly.

'I will reminder' is incorrect; 'reminder' is a noun, so the verb 'set' is needed. 'For improperly' is incorrect; 'properly' is the correct adverb here.

× Otherwise I have phones for liquid, some alarm and something where I don't like paper so I could work with some reminder also which are good for an easy thing for you from.

✓ Otherwise, I use my phone for alarms and reminders because I don't like paper. These reminders are good and easy to use.

The original sentence is unclear and misuses pronouns and nouns. 'Phones for liquid' is incorrect; likely meant 'phone for alarms'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.