Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use simple and correct sentences to express your ideas naturally.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember important dates and facts from my studies, which helps me perform well in exams.

제안: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Make sure to directly answer the question and explain with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I once forgot an important exam last year because I did not prepare well. Since then, I have worked very hard to improve my study habits and avoid such mistakes.

제안: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and support it with relevant details. Use linking words to make your answer logical and easy to understand.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember to do morning exercises for my health. I believe staying healthy is very important, so I make sure to follow a good routine.

제안: Your answer is better but can be improved by using correct tense and adding linking words. Provide more specific details to make your answer effective and natural.

예시: I usually write important things in my notebook, so I don't forget them. This way, I can easily remember all the dates and tasks I need to complete in the future.

× I had all lot memories and I even know all the things in the past and I have very latest memory thing.

✓ I had a lot of memories and I even knew all the things in the past and I have a very recent memory.

The phrase 'all lot memories' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of memories' to correctly express quantity. Also, 'know' should be in past tense 'knew' to match 'in the past'. 'Very latest memory thing' is awkward; 'a very recent memory' is more appropriate. These corrections address pluralization and tense consistency.

× Yes I forgotten my exam last year so I have so many played for this exam and I have so done hard working for that.

✓ Yes, I forgot my exam last year so I had prepared a lot for this exam and I worked very hard for that.

'Forgotten' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb; here simple past 'forgot' is correct. 'Have so many played' is incorrect; it should be 'had prepared a lot' to express past effort. 'Have so done hard working' is incorrect; 'worked very hard' is the correct past tense form. These corrections fix past tense usage and verb forms.

× I need to remember a morning work for my health and I always our health and health employee and I didn't want attic person.

✓ I need to remember my morning routine for my health and I always take care of my health and health habits, and I don't want to be a lazy person.

'A morning work' is incorrect; 'my morning routine' is better. 'I always our health and health employee' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'I always take care of my health and health habits'. 'I didn't want attic person' is incorrect; likely meant 'I don't want to be a lazy person'. These corrections address preposition misuse and unclear phrasing.

× I had written things in my notebook and I always remember all the dates and facts that I have to do in future.

✓ I write things in my notebook and I always remember all the dates and facts that I have to do in the future.

'I had written' suggests past perfect which is unnecessary here; simple present 'I write' fits better as the habit is ongoing. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future' to be grammatically correct. These corrections fix verb tense and article usage.