Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: La tua risposta manca di chiarezza e coerenza. Cerca di strutturare la risposta con una frase principale chiara e poi aggiungere dettagli specifici usando connettivi logici. Evita frasi incomplete o confuse e limita la risposta a massimo 5 frasi.

예시: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I have a strong visual memory. For example, I can easily remember pictures of my notes and figures. This skill helped me a lot during my high school exams. Therefore, I feel confident about my memorising abilities.

제안: La risposta è poco chiara e incompleta. Cerca di rispondere direttamente alla domanda con una frase principale e poi aggiungi dettagli specifici usando connettivi per rendere il discorso più fluido e coerente.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes. I think my memory has worsened as I have gotten older. For instance, I sometimes forget appointments or deadlines, which makes me worried. However, I try to improve by using reminders.

제안: La risposta è abbastanza chiara ma può essere migliorata usando frasi più complete e collegamenti logici per rendere il discorso più naturale e fluido. Cerca di evitare pause e frammenti di frase.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important appointments, such as a visit to the dentist. For example, I had an appointment scheduled six months ago, and thankfully my cellphone reminded me on the day. This helps me stay organised and not miss important events.

제안: La risposta è confusa e poco naturale. Cerca di rispondere direttamente con una frase principale e poi aggiungere dettagli specifici usando connettivi per migliorare la coerenza e la chiarezza.

예시: I usually remember important things by using my cellphone. I write all my appointments in the calendar app, and it sends me reminders a day or an hour before the event. This method helps me stay organised and not forget important tasks.

× I think I always add I am visual memory so that I can remember pictures of my notes, books, figures.

✓ I think I always have a visual memory so that I can remember pictures of my notes, books, figures.

The phrase 'I always add I am visual memory' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'I always have a visual memory' to indicate possession of a type of memory. The verb 'add' is incorrectly used here and should be replaced with 'have'.

× So I'm very good. I did and always when I did my Ural text in high school. I could always.

✓ So I'm very good. I did, and always when I did my oral test in high school, I could always remember.

The sentence is incomplete and contains a typo 'Ural text' which should be 'oral test'. Also, the phrase 'I could always' is incomplete and needs an object or complement to complete the meaning. The corrected sentence completes the thought and fixes the typo.

× I have to say that I've worsened this.

✓ I have to say that this has worsened.

The phrase 'I've worsened this' incorrectly uses the verb 'worsened' reflexively. The correct form is 'this has worsened' to indicate that the condition has become worse over time.

× Thing come as a I aged 'cause I usually remembered everything as I said, I had a strong memory, but now, yes, I'm a little bit worried that.

✓ Things come as I age because I usually remembered everything. As I said, I had a strong memory, but now, yes, I'm a little bit worried.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains errors such as 'Thing come as a I aged'. It should be 'Things come as I age' to indicate the process of aging. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For example, today I had to do a visit to. The dentist and this was an appointment that I had taken.

✓ For example, today I had to visit the dentist, and this was an appointment that I had made.

The phrase 'do a visit to the dentist' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'visit the dentist'. Also, 'had taken' an appointment is incorrect; the correct verb is 'had made' an appointment.

× thank God there is my cellphone that reminded me, of course.

✓ Thank God there is my cellphone that reminds me, of course.

The verb tense should be present simple 'reminds' because the cellphone habitually reminds the speaker. Also, the sentence should start with a capital letter 'Thank'.

× I can't remember important things thanks to my cell phone and I'm like in my calendar there are my appointment.

✓ I can't remember important things without my cell phone, and in my calendar, there are my appointments.

The phrase 'I can't remember important things thanks to my cell phone' is incorrect; it should be 'without my cell phone' to express dependence. Also, 'my appointment' should be plural 'my appointments' to match the plural subject 'there are'. The phrase 'I'm like' is unnecessary and removed.

× Written and then the day before or the hour before I have to do something that I had planned for months and active.

✓ They are written, and then the day before or the hour before, I have to do something that I had planned for months in advance.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Written' should be connected to 'appointments' as 'They are written'. The phrase 'and active' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in advance' to indicate prior planning.