Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ, ví dụ như 'in only in the short term' và 'focus in remember'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I usually remember information only for a short time. For example, when I try to do several tests at once, it becomes difficult for me to focus and remember everything.

제안: Bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'I forgot my I forgot', 'imperius', và 'do project my back'. Hãy chú ý phát âm và chọn từ phù hợp. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh lỗi lặp từ.

예시: Yes, I once forgot to bring my ID card to an important meeting. I didn't realize it until I was asked to show it, which made me feel quite embarrassed. Since then, I always check my bag to make sure I have everything I need.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý chính tả và ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'house chorus' nên là 'house chores'. Câu trả lời có thể rõ ràng hơn nếu bạn dùng liên từ để kết nối các ý và tránh lỗi thì.

예시: I usually need to remember simple things like what homework or tests I have on the same day besides school work. Also, I try to keep track of house chores and errands I need to finish, which helps me stay organized.

제안: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa mạch lạc, ví dụ 'in my phones not have' và câu bắt đầu bằng 'Which'. Bạn nên dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

예시: Recently, I have been trying to write down important things that come to my mind on my phone. This way, I can easily check them whenever I need, which helps me remember better. I also use a calendar app to set reminders for important events so I never forget them.

× I'm not very good at memorizing things because I tend to remember information in only in the short term, but I struggle to retain it for a long time.

✓ I'm not very good at memorizing things because I tend to remember information only in the short term, but I struggle to retain it for a long time.

The phrase 'in only in the short term' contains a repeated preposition 'in'. The correct phrase is 'only in the short term'. This is a prepositional error, but since it involves the verb phrase 'remember information in the short term', it is best categorized under verb + -ing form issue due to the verb phrase structure. The suggestion is to remove the repeated 'in' to improve clarity and correctness.

× For example, when I tried to do several tests as once, it becomes difficult for me to focus in remember.

✓ For example, when I tried to do several tests at once, it becomes difficult for me to focus on remembering.

The phrase 'focus in remember' is incorrect. The verb 'focus' is usually followed by the preposition 'on' and a gerund (-ing form) when indicating the object of focus. Therefore, 'focus in remember' should be corrected to 'focus on remembering'. Also, 'as once' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'at once'. This correction addresses verb + -ing form and preposition usage.

× Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, last week I forgot my I forgot to bring my ID card to an important meeting.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, last week I forgot to bring my ID card to an important meeting.

The sentence contains a repeated phrase 'I forgot my I forgot to bring'. This is a redundancy and disrupts the sentence structure. Removing the repeated part corrects the sentence. The tense 'forgot' is correct as it refers to a past event.

× At first I didn't realize it until I was asked to show it, which made me feel quite imperius.

✓ At first I didn't realize it until I was asked to show it, which made me feel quite imperious.

The word 'imperius' is a misspelling of the adjective 'imperious'. Using the correct adjective form improves clarity and correctness.

× Since then I always do project my back to make sure I have everything I need.

✓ Since then I always double-check my bag to make sure I have everything I need.

The phrase 'do project my back' is incorrect and unclear. It seems the intended meaning is to check or verify one's belongings. 'Double-check my bag' is a common and correct expression. Also, 'back' is likely a typo for 'bag'. This correction addresses incorrect pronoun and word usage.

× I usually need to remember simple things like what homework or test I have on the same day besides school work.

✓ I usually need to remember simple things like what homework or tests I have on the same day besides school work.

The word 'test' should be plural 'tests' to agree with 'homework' which is uncountable but here implies multiple assignments. This correction addresses singular and plural agreement.

× I also tried to keep track of house chorus or any errands that I need to finish.

✓ I also try to keep track of house chores or any errands that I need to finish.

The phrase 'house chorus' is incorrect; the correct term is 'house chores'. Also, 'tried' should be 'try' to maintain present tense consistency. This correction addresses adjective usage and tense.

× Recently I have been trying to write down important things that come to my mind in my phones not have.

✓ Recently I have been trying to write down important things that come to my mind in my phone's note app.

The phrase 'in my phones not have' is incorrect and unclear. It likely intends to say 'in my phone's note app' or similar. Also, 'phones' should be singular 'phone' with possessive form. This correction addresses present tense and noun usage.

× This way I can easily check them whenever I need. Which helps me to remember better.

✓ This way I can easily check them whenever I need, which helps me to remember better.

The sentence 'Which helps me to remember better.' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence with a comma to form a complete sentence. This correction addresses sentence structure errors.

× I also use a calendar app to set reminders for important events so I never forgot them.

✓ I also use a calendar app to set reminders for important events so I never forget them.

The phrase 'so I never forgot them' uses past tense 'forgot' incorrectly in this context. The present tense 'forget' is appropriate because the action is habitual or ongoing. This correction addresses past tense issue.