Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

예시: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially important information like people's names and dates. I find that associating memories with photos or specific subjects helps me remember better.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu cấu trúc rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, có chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, when I was young, I sometimes forgot to do my homework because I was more interested in playing with my friends.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có một số lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'combat things' và 'purchase a new skill' không phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn.

예시: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks such as completing my homework and finishing work assignments. For example, I try to learn new skills to prepare for my future career, and remembering these tasks helps me stay organized and improve myself.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'purchase followed by my To Do List' và câu không mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và giải thích cách bạn sử dụng danh sách công việc để nhớ các nhiệm vụ.

예시: I usually make a To-Do List to remember important tasks. This helps me stay organized and manage many tasks in one day effectively.

× He finally, I can't exactly remember memory because I've because for me, memory about people about like some photo, some subject or some cannolis is so very important to improve and enhance my life and capture the moment.

✓ Finally, I can't exactly remember because, for me, memory about people, like some photos, some subjects, or some cannolis, is very important to improve and enhance my life and capture the moment.

The original sentence has a confusing structure with repeated words and unclear phrasing. The correction removes redundancy and clarifies the meaning by properly ordering the sentence and using commas to separate ideas.

× I think yes when I was young are have forgotten my school back uh when I go to school is so fun yeah, I think when I don't care about like my study and I want to play more playing and I think this is so marries memory remember this.

✓ I think yes, when I was young, I forgot my schoolwork. When I went to school, it was so fun. Yeah, I think when I didn't care about my studies and wanted to play more, I have this memory clearly.

The original sentence mixes tenses incorrectly and has unclear phrasing. The correction uses past tense consistently for past events and clarifies the meaning by restructuring the sentence.

× In my daily life, I need to remember many important things, changes like combat things, my homework and finish tasks at work.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember many important things, such as commitments, my homework, and tasks to finish at work.

The phrase 'changes like combat things' is unclear and likely a misuse of prepositions and vocabulary. The correction replaces it with 'such as commitments' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× For example, I always try to purchase a new skill to prepare for my future carrier and remembering these things help me stay organized and improve myself.

✓ For example, I always try to acquire new skills to prepare for my future career, and remembering these things helps me stay organized and improve myself.

'Purchase a new skill' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'acquire new skills.' Also, 'carrier' is a misspelling of 'career.' The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'remembering these things.'

× Actually I think I need to remember many tasks in one day and I always make To Do List Ann purchase followed by my To Do List.

✓ Actually, I think I need to remember many tasks in one day, and I always make a To-Do List and follow it accordingly.

The phrase 'make To Do List Ann purchase followed by my To Do List' is unclear and incorrect. The correction clarifies the intended meaning by using 'make a To-Do List and follow it accordingly.'

× So I think it's a super excited for me an I can improve an control so many tasks in one day.

✓ So I think it's super exciting for me, and I can improve and control many tasks in one day.

'Super excited' is an adjective describing a person, but here the speaker means the situation is exciting, so 'super exciting' is correct. Also, 'an' should be 'and,' and 'improve an control' should be 'improve and control.'