Memory— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ немного повторяется и содержит грамматические ошибки, например, "while you're working" неуместно. Постарайтесь использовать более разнообразную лексику и избегать повторов, а также следите за согласованием времен и местоимений.

예시: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorising, especially when it comes to daily tasks. For instance, I often write notes or set reminders to stay organized and efficient throughout the day.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит много грамматических ошибок и повторов. Необходимо строить предложения более логично и использовать связующие слова для ясности. Также важно завершать мысли и избегать незаконченных фраз.

예시: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once when I was about to leave for a business trip to New York, I realized I had forgotten my flight ticket at home, which caused me a lot of stress.

제안: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения, например, "lessons plans an important grammar points" и "so that it could be officially". Рекомендуется использовать более точные формулировки и связующие слова для логичности.

예시: As an English teacher, I need to remember many things, especially lesson plans and important grammar points. This helps me keep my class engaged and ensures the lessons run smoothly.

제안: В ответе есть повтор слова "and" и опечатка "nodes" вместо "notes". Следует избегать повторов и проверять правильность слов. Также можно добавить связующие слова для плавности речи.

예시: For really important things, I don't rely solely on my memory. Instead, I use my diary and set special notes or reminders on my phone to make sure I don't forget.

× This helps me to keep organized and efficient while you're working.

✓ This helps me to keep organized and efficient while I'm working.

The pronoun 'you're' (you are) is incorrect here because the subject is the speaker themselves, not the listener. It should be 'I'm' (I am) to match the subject of the sentence.

× Yes, I definitely have forgotten important things and for example one that came to my mind is was.

✓ Yes, I definitely have forgotten important things; for example, one that came to my mind was when...

The sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured. 'Is was' is incorrect and confusing. The sentence should be restructured to clearly introduce the example and complete the thought.

× But when I traveled to New York, traveled to New York on business trip and when I was about to leave my home, I realized that I have my flight was.

✓ But when I traveled to New York on a business trip and was about to leave my home, I realized that I had missed my flight.

The sentence has repetition ('traveled to New York' twice), missing articles ('a business trip'), and incorrect tense and structure ('I have my flight was'). It should be corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, as an English teacher I have to remember a lot of things but the most challenging for me is remembering lessons plans an important grammar points.

✓ Yes, as an English teacher I have to remember a lot of things but the most challenging for me is remembering lesson plans and important grammar points.

'Lessons plans' should be 'lesson plans' (plural noun with correct form), and 'an important grammar points' is incorrect because 'an' is singular but 'points' is plural. It should be 'and important grammar points' without 'an'.

× This helps me to keep my class engaged into lesson so that it could be officially.

✓ This helps me to keep my class engaged in the lesson so that it can be effective.

The phrase 'engaged into lesson' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'engaged in the lesson'. Also, 'officially' is inappropriate here; 'effective' or a similar adjective fits the context better.

× When it comes to really important things, I usually do not tend to rely on my memory only. So I use my diary and and set a special nodes or I set reminders on my phone.

✓ When it comes to really important things, I usually do not tend to rely on my memory only. So I use my diary and set special notes or reminders on my phone.

'Special nodes' is incorrect; the correct word is 'notes'. Also, the repeated 'and' is a typo. The sentence should be corrected for word choice and clarity.